Watching ... (Repost) by KiwiMiss

Photography • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Apr 21, 2005

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Hi There First of all thanks to all of you who were kind enough to comment and make suggestions on how I could improve on my previous post 'Watching ...'. I usually don't do much in the way of postwork, mostly because I just don't have the knowledge as yet and partly due to lack of time in obtaining it. I have altered both the contrast and brightness on this one as suggested and think it's improved the mood. Do you think this is better??? Thanks again for viewing ... Noeline

Comments (13)

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Dianthus

2:40AM | Thu, 21 April 2005

I too am learning postwork. But am limited in time. This photo has such feeling. Great in B&W. Maybe little less brightness? Definately a photo to be proud of. Love it :)

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Zacko

3:10AM | Thu, 21 April 2005

Still a very beautiful and emotional shot. I think u have improved it actually. And i know there is still that can be done to enhance the contours but i think that would take away the feeling of it. I do belive its perfect as it is now. Way to go Noeline, you did great #:O) Have a wonderful weekend!!!!!!

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Zabeth

4:25AM | Thu, 21 April 2005

The mood is stunning! very sensitiv shot... Have a great day!

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Enmos

5:44AM | Thu, 21 April 2005

I think it is, but you might wanna try fadecorrection :o) Still a beautiful shot !! :o)

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Georges_H_Hoens

6:40AM | Thu, 21 April 2005

I love the shot for what he represent, a wonderfull and peacefull scene. Someone says "emotionnal" I plainly agree. BTW, Enmos is right about trying fade correction. EXCL !

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TwoPynts

8:27AM | Thu, 21 April 2005

Ahh, you did it! :) Yes, I think it improves it a good bit. Maybe a fully black border would make it pop even more...but it is good as it is. :)

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Lledeline

9:27AM | Thu, 21 April 2005

It's better in a technical way. But I prefered the mood in the previous shot.

deannemart

11:18AM | Thu, 21 April 2005

I agree with Lledeline - the other shot may seem too bright, but that's part of its charm!

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escafeld

4:02PM | Thu, 21 April 2005

Suggestion, but only if you have Paint Shop Pro. On your first Post - in Colors, Adjust, Brightness/Contrast, try -45 Brightness +30 Contrast. I could do more, but this involves other applications.

soulofharmony

5:30PM | Thu, 21 April 2005

jus think the post is beautiful the pose and capture is priceless..l like the mist.. gives a touch of romance.. may be a tad more contrast is all.. youve killed alot of brightness... just a priceless piece of p'graphy.. if you heart is happy with the way it is... thats what counts.. hugssss :)

tvernuccio

3:37AM | Fri, 22 April 2005

i love the enchanted feel to this! you made such a wonderful, moody capture, and as far as postwork, you will learn that in time. me, personally, i might increase the contrast a bit more. but really, it all depends on what YOU like...what you're going for. it's a very special image!!!!

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sossy

7:37AM | Sat, 23 April 2005

it really looks better but could use more contrast and live. I started here with shots looking pale and ill, because I showed the original photos. But then I found out that almost everyone is working on them and I started to learn how to use postwork and I liked the result! ;o)))

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Margana

6:29AM | Mon, 06 June 2005

Noooo.Not more contrast.I don't agree with Rita.It looks wonderful like this.It looks like an old family photograph.I really ove how they're both looking off at the same thing.EXCELLENT!