Green and White Spring composition by chantal-france
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THANKS!!!!!!
I have changed my posting according to your suggestions + to my own auto-criticism :))
I have ajusted the crispness of some shots + the contrast, and I think it's better now :)) thanks a lot :))
I have also changed a little bit the presentation : adding more space between the background and the photos + adding a more visible white border to it, to be more homogenous with the framing of the photos inside :))
I hope you will like this new version :))
A specific thank to Pierre59, Jocko500, pimbotin, onslow, escafeld and CDBrugg for their help :))
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I post this shot, but I am not fully satisfied with it ... could you help me to find out a way to make it better ??
Thanks for your help,
Hugs,
Chantal
Comments (54)
chrysalide
Une tr belle photographie avec une jolie presentation. La photographie du milieu est excellente et les autres aussi. les couleurs sont belles. je te souhaite une aggrble soir
CDBrugg
c'est absolument parfait :-))
escafeld
I like this montage very much. They only way that I would improve it is to select 4/5 images with similar lighting. The daffodil has high contrast lighting with direct sun. The Candytuft below is in subdued lighting and does not match. It is very difficult to match images unless you go out and deliberately take them with montages in mind. Still excellent!!!
BorisB
Sorry, I can see no problems, this is a wonderful collection, a very nice composition in white!!!
Zabeth
C'est superbe j'adore! c'est rafraichissant... Peut re te manque t il un brin de muguet? Je ne sais pas? Moi il ne me manque rien part de voir un beau sourire sur ton visage ;-) Bonne soir!
sadlers5
I like it but I don't know how to make it better, :)
Onslow
I think this is a beautiful montage - some of the whites are warmer than others and the daff is a bit weightier so could be moved to bottom left (mirrored to face inwards) but all is a matter of personal preferences and it doesn't stop enjoyment of the montage as it is.
GiMi53
Et pourtant on dit que les fleurs blanches sont les plus difficiles photographier... ce sont 5 perles que tu as colls l Chantal ! Quelle id grandiose, parfaitement rlis ! Une fois de plus je trouve que tu es trop se avec toi-me.... Demain je poste (d ma 200ie photo sur R'osity... tu fais certainement partie des personnes qui m'ont inspiret aid! Merci pour tes conseils et ton amiti Chantal, et continue nous enchanter ! :~)
Niutek
I think they're all very lovely and fresh looking shots, perfect for a spring composition and the location of every shot within the frame is a matter of taste. Wonderful collage, Chantal :))
pimbotin
Oh que oui! A mon avis celle lsouffre du me proble que les 95% des miennes. Un manque de nettet Avec les softs modernes, c'est facile de palier (pas dans tous les cas mais pour des fleurs devrait jouer). Sur photofiltre, c'est juste un click dans "Filtre--Nettet-Plus net". C'est une sorte de cache mise en sorte, parce qu'on ne peut pas vraiment combler ce manque de fan "normale" mais marche quand me pas mal... n'enle rien au plaisir que l'on a douvrir ce post, of course!!!
sharky_
Beautiful flowers and an excellent job putting this together. Aloha
Margana
Love this compo...that flower in the middle looks amazing!What a lovely presentation.
maggiemai
I love this...just as it is!!! Beautiful ...beautiful composition. Excellent!
jocko500
looks real good to me lol what to say to make it better? that is a hard question. the diff in lighting and the contrast is diff in each one. may try photoshop to get them closer if you like but then I do not thimk that is what you wish here. I give up sorry that all I can think of ; but then it may make things worst lol.
odie
The thumbnail alone captured my eye. This is a stunning presentation with green and white!! I think it is very refreshing with only those two colors. Wouldn't change a thing. :0)
blacq_nyght_vampyre
Beautifully done!!!
curly-locks
i think its just lovely as it is... and i agree the thumbnail just caught my eye it looks so spring like
b2amphot
Some sound suggestions above, but I really wouldn't change it... there's a point where you're down to minute details that really won't affect the overall effect of the piece. Hmmm, did that make sense?
Sekadhar
Wonderful collage and very beautiful! Excellent done!*****!
Tedz
I can't find fault...it is a fine Composition.
nongo
It's perfectly beautiful!!!!! I wouldn't change a thing!!!! ;)
GiveMe
Beautifully done. Tks :^)
Dianthus
Beautiful composition and presentation:)
kennyliu
Lovely white color flowers!!V***
GOLDILOCKSUK
What do you want to change it for it's very impressive. I love the way you have set the flowers out, it is beautifully portrayed. Please do not change it. Superb flowers and very clear pictures vote Cathy oxoxox
cynlee
think it came out pretty well chantal... i'm not real keen on overlapping images myself but it doesn't bother me either... lovely shots all in whites, the bottom right is my fave :]
Gor111
Fantastic photo serie with all the marvellous and beautiful white flowers! Excellent color settings and lightnings! Excellent presentation with the wonderful green frame around! Bravo!!! V
Pierre59
Belle et agrble compo Chantal !!! Puisque tu demandes de l'aide mon avis le proble de nettetde "pimpotin" toi de voir, moi je constate que l'lairage n'est pas identique sur toutes les photos et en particulier sur celle en haut gauche avec beaucoup d'ombre et celle du milieu sur-ex n'est-ce pas ce qui ne te satisfais pas ? Essaye aussi ta compo avec seulement quatres photos sans celle du milieu pour ne pas manger les cadres photos ! avec l'espoir de t'avoir aidun peu ?
Zacko
Im sorry, cant provide any help for you...how do one improve on perfection??? Ive told you this before but im gonna do it again. You create the most stunning collages, and this is definitly no exception. INCREDIBLE!!!! Have a wonderful day #:O)
marybelgium
Ravissant !