"He is not coming back..." by -Amalthea-
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Just a quick design as I exercise my hair and clothes painting. The model is Soulange for SP3 with the oh-so-magnificient Real Skin Shader, and the rest is Photoshopped with my tablet. Don't pull your punches as you perform constructive criticism. I still need to learn more.
Comments (29)
Casette
FANTASTIC WORK !!! :O
UweMattern
To learn? This could not be improved, so sorry i have no critics! PS. If you want to learn something, try to render hair and cloth ;-)) ~Uwe
LaraLuvMe
Fabulous! Looks a bit lke me! VOTE
pjaj
Very beautiful work here!! Excellent job!!
svdl
Sorry, can't help you there! I can't find a single thing that could be improved. That hair is fantastic, and the cloth, wow! Fantastic work.
Bobbie25
i dont comment much but this is lovely hun well done and got a vote from me hugz
Orionboy
Excellent work !!! Bye Orion ^_^
templargfx
firstly excellent, secondly, if you want suggestions for improvement, Im your man! firstly, the fringe and front lining hair is EXCELLENT, but unfortunately the clarity of strands is not carried out further back, I realise this takes time, but IMO if your going to paint something onto a poser image, it really needs to as detailed throughout as the rest of the poser produced image (this skin looks excellent, and detailed). in particular, the seam in her hair doesnt carry on past the fringe. The cloth is excellent, and very well carried out, in particular, the folds above for left breast. Perhaps try to paint in shadows (there are lights in the background, and obviosly a light off to the right, but no shadows are present, this would really add to the already great realism of your image. and finally, I really like the slightly out-of-focus look of the background, gives nice depth! So, there you have it, THE TRUTH from me. sorry if I have offended, but if you ask and I see it, the truth you will recieve
Kinouk
Beautiful image!! Excellent!! hugz and kisses
kbobbitt
It's all great, but the hair is magnificent!!
-Amalthea-
Thanks templargfx, your kind of constructive criticism is all I hope for. I'm hardly offended. ;)
linkdink
Wow, she is stunning! I would love the opportunity to make her forget all about that other guy....
Mint3D
I think the hair differences gives image a very nice focus, she looks very realistic and very very hmmm can i say Full? :) Excellent in everyway :)
Arien
This looks superb. The hair is top-notch (I'm asuming the blurred top left is on purpose, as there is little light there). The cloth is very, very nicely painted; my only criticism -and it's minor- is that I can't quite put my head around how she's wearing the cloth. One of these days I'll have to start upping the realism myself, I hope I can get as good as you are now :)
dorkati
Beautiful work!!
wildfire2003
This is gorgeous. The hair looks perfect to me, the details fading with the light is most natural. Excellent!
SweetOne
WOW!!! This is excellent!! I love the lighting and the image is filled with emotion! Excellent work on your painting as well!!! Perfection!
cappy3
Outstanding postwork,..WOW!! Beautiful image!!
face_off
What a fantastic composition!!!! Oozes atmosphere, and I love her lips. Pretty hard to crit really.
angelluciano
Yea the blurredness of the back of the hair is the only thing I can see wrong with it too... but damn this is an great image! lol Got my vote.
odditorium
Very Nice! Love the detail! -- odd --
Neyjour
Wow!!! The realism is outstanding! Beautiful work! :)
Draftshop
I'd come back! Excellent work.
Fogge
Very beautiful.. The composition, light and postwork is amazing. Excellent work!
B_PEACOCK
This is a very impressive image
nyprox
Damn i thought it was a photo first off. This is an amazing image.
DukeNukem2005
Bravo! It is super! Very beautiful image!
campbellsoup59
well done!
Homus_Artistic
This ia a very nice image. Very well done. The tones and the manipulation of light and shadows in the dress is excellent. If you are in pursuit of ultimate realism, focus on the facial expression. I cannot pinpoint it very well, but something in the eyes and mouth seem artificial. Once again, this is a great render and you should be proud of it