Dark Dayz - Issue 2 by jarm
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Dark Dayz Issue 2. Hopefully still interesting, revelations coming, but I'm not too sure when :-)
Next issue should be up by Wednesday.
Comments (5)
badgerboy
This is great jarm, keep up the goodwork! :D
Moebius87
Love the banter here. Stunning imagery. One can only hope that by the next installment, you'll spell my name right. :oP You can tell that I'm running out of things to nitpick here.
MajinBoo
I like what I've seen so far, can't wait for the next page.
Eugenius
Sounds like your character is having a rough morning: it must have been a Monday. Love the story so far. Don't mind Moe, he's jealous because he can't write stories as good as you can :-)
FreeJack
Hey, glad I saw this - I think you have something here! Couple of things - if you use military time (0900) there's no reason for an a.m. or p.m. designation. Also, the name of the cops could use a little something. Maybe make their acronym literally GOON Squad (General Order Operations Negotiations Squad, or something), or even a definition that goes with COPS (City Order Protection Squad).