My Refuge by FireTemptress

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on May 09, 2005

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My Refuge Light some candles Pour the wine Run the water deep Create a world No one can touch My heart and mind are free The cares I felt Throughout the day Just melt as minutes pass My fingers dribble Water drops My lips on frosty glass Lean my head back Close my eyes My breathing starts to slow This is my escape No time, just me The music starts to flow In a while Things will return My bubble

Comments (10)

atom80

11:36PM | Mon, 09 May 2005

A wonderful idea. We all need a place to get away from it all. Escape to your haven and just unwind. This piece sets my heart at ease...

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TallPockets

4:24AM | Tue, 10 May 2005

Most excellent work! V In the words of singer Bobby McFerrin, "Don't worry, be happy!". WINK.

Wolfspirit

5:24AM | Tue, 10 May 2005

Yes, this is so lovely I too know that feeling and that place"Smiles" This is a smooth, relaxing, delightful read.

FormingInYourMind223

5:45AM | Tue, 10 May 2005

I like this description, like everyone else, because it seems like a nice retreat from everyday life. Excellent indeed

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alsafysh

3:57PM | Tue, 10 May 2005

bravo! you painted the perfect picture of solitude the kind we all desire at times. excellent

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dido6

6:36PM | Tue, 10 May 2005

Beautiful :) I love the pictures this paints. Very nice job!

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micsteel

9:26PM | Tue, 10 May 2005

Everyone needs a little time to themselves, to allow their minds to think: Otherwise, we never learn anything from our days, and repeat the same mistakes... My recommendation to my firends is: 30 minutes a day, PLUS two hours once a week, to yourself, to BE yourself, with no demands from friends, pets or family!

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NothingNess

12:28PM | Wed, 11 May 2005

This is beautiful. I can't remember the last time I was able to do this for myself.

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experimental

3:29PM | Thu, 12 May 2005

Excellent writing, I think you have written a great meditative piece. Everyone should have a refuge for meditation. Mine just happens to occur in the middle of traffic when the music is blaring and I'm singing at the top of my lungs.

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