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Description
Suddenly
Nothing
No emails
No chat sessions
No instant messages
Nothing
Emails sent
went unanswered
Can't initiate chat
user not online
Instant messages
piled up, unread
Nothing
Hours turned
to days
to weeks
Nothing
Online
we were everything
Offline
we had nothing
No one to call
No one to ask
What happened?
Is my dear friend
alright?
Nothing
Bonds of
friendship
and Love
reduced to
nothing
One thing
and only
one thing
could have
severed us
Tears won't fall
for a friendship
that ended too
soon
And I
left with
nothing
but the
memory of
you
I think that anyone that's ever had online friendships can appreciate the anxiety in this piece. Thank you for reading....Leah
I think that anyone that's ever had online friendships can appreciate the anxiety in this piece. Thank you for reading....Leah
Comments (9)
jrahn
I know that feeling :-/ but if ya need a friend, jrahnxri@hotmail.com!
nocturnecsh
One can only hope that it's a computer malfunction and not a heart malfunction. The flow was perfect for the emotion shared in this piece. Well written. And, to add mine: nocturnecsh@yahoo.com
eternalwytch1
I know the feeling babes... mine is eternalwytch1@ev1.net
TallPockets
First, most excellent written work! Someone once told me "you cannot lose what you never really had"? (I hope that came out the way I intended it to be). It seems to me it's the other person's real loss? Hang tough! My best, T.P.
Shadowmonkey
Your works has definitely got better my dear friend. It is good because I thought it was already excellent. But then when a kind heart is put with a mind like yours I think magic can happen. Oh and hi there Leah hope you are well ;0)
Strondar
Hi Leah. I hear you. Oh boy, do I hear you!! Great piece! Says it all really!
digitalgrey
I started off laughing at the humour and ended trembling at the emotion. Wonderful Piece.
Enlightened
I think we can all relate to the emotions that an online friend can stir up. Excellent portrayal of online friendships :o)
PhrankPower
So true, with on line or off line friends.