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Bumble-Bee

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Jun 16, 2005
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OK, I wrote this poem because have you ever met someone of the opposite sex that when your already with someone, they make it seem like you should be with them, and they treat you so great, but then one day, when you realize you might have feelings for them, they just stop having conversations with you, and barely speak to you at all? This is how I have felt before, and now I remember, I write about it here. For I have been stung by a beautiful Bumble-Bee. You've made me weak I made you strong You came in my life To throw me off I knew you were bad The second we met I thought you were kind You made me regret I don't want you here Anymore Leave me here Dying on the floor Crushing me With all your lies Put under the glass Like your stupid fly Stretch me wide Crawl inside Live in my blood Waiting, hide Now you've hatched Spread your venom Make me believe Crush my prism Inside it holds All of my dreams You turned them briefly Into reality I held your hand I watched you crawl You fell from above Only to to kill all That I had in me It's hard to believe That I couldn't see All of your desciet And all along I thought you would heal All the wounds That are revealed Guess I was wrong Guess they were right I'll never talk to you again So this is good-bye

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Shadowmonkey

7:31AM | Fri, 17 June 2005

I new a bumble bee once. Well put my dear ;0)

Enlightened

8:55AM | Fri, 17 June 2005

Yes, I met a bumble bee, was round and colourful.. breezed into my life and breezed out again without a second thought. I imagined stamping on him and squishing him lol.. excellently worded :o)

pyrebeast

6:25PM | Fri, 17 June 2005

dustin, can i use this i a song i instantly come up with music and everything

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TallPockets

11:53PM | Fri, 17 June 2005

Very well done. "I knew you were bad". I liked that line the best. T.P.

x_broken_minded_x

2:31PM | Sat, 18 June 2005

i definitely understand everything...and comparing to a bumble-bee worked wonders cuz its great..just try not and get to upset over this...maybe she will come to her senses...well im here for you whenever...

LifesMisperceptions

5:46PM | Sun, 03 July 2005

Great job bro.....you've always had a talent with words.....keep it up.....ive been out of the circle and fill me in on this.....really enjoyed this peice though


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