Bumble-Bee by FormingInYourMind223
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Description
OK, I wrote this poem because have you ever met someone of the opposite sex that when your already with someone, they make it seem like you should be with them, and they treat you so great, but then one day, when you realize you might have feelings for them, they just stop having conversations with you, and barely speak to you at all? This is how I have felt before, and now I remember, I write about it here. For I have been stung by a beautiful Bumble-Bee.
You've made me weak
I made you strong
You came in my life
To throw me off
I knew you were bad
The second we met
I thought you were kind
You made me regret
I don't want you here
Anymore
Leave me here
Dying on the floor
Crushing me
With all your lies
Put under the glass
Like your stupid fly
Stretch me wide
Crawl inside
Live in my blood
Waiting, hide
Now you've hatched
Spread your venom
Make me believe
Crush my prism
Inside it holds
All of my dreams
You turned them briefly
Into reality
I held your hand
I watched you crawl
You fell from above
Only to to kill all
That I had in me
It's hard to believe
That I couldn't see
All of your desciet
And all along
I thought you would heal
All the wounds
That are revealed
Guess I was wrong
Guess they were right
I'll never talk to you again
So this is good-bye
Comments (6)
Shadowmonkey
I new a bumble bee once. Well put my dear ;0)
Enlightened
Yes, I met a bumble bee, was round and colourful.. breezed into my life and breezed out again without a second thought. I imagined stamping on him and squishing him lol.. excellently worded :o)
pyrebeast
dustin, can i use this i a song i instantly come up with music and everything
TallPockets
Very well done. "I knew you were bad". I liked that line the best. T.P.
x_broken_minded_x
i definitely understand everything...and comparing to a bumble-bee worked wonders cuz its great..just try not and get to upset over this...maybe she will come to her senses...well im here for you whenever...
LifesMisperceptions
Great job bro.....you've always had a talent with words.....keep it up.....ive been out of the circle and fill me in on this.....really enjoyed this peice though