For A Moment by katili
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From the black sleep I woke
for a moment I danced with the shadows
the strawberry path of lights
my bare feet embraced the scented sand
and fell asleep with the flickering face of the lake.
For a moment the wind swept away
the rotten layers from the pages of my book.
Comments (7)
meico
You say so much with so few words ... I'm intrigued always. I wish you a fair wind and soft sand for your feet.
nheo
Clear, strong, poetic imagery, I love the last 5 lines.
PumaSue
Beautiful and sad! That sounds like life. Excellent poem, Katili.
TallPockets
Beautiful piece and artwork!!
Wolfspirit
I agree with all above and excellent work indeed!
katili
Thank you all, and I am very happy to be back with all of you dear friends.
figharo
Very moody, very direct, the last few lines really are extraordinary, Wonderful.