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Subject: January challenge WIP

Jausse opened this issue on Jan 14, 2003 ยท 11 posts
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Jausse ( ) posted Tue, 14 January 2003 at 12:09 AM ยท edited Thu, 06 February 2025 at 10:44 PM

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Here's a WIP for the January Challenge. A new day is beginning, a flight of Eggle Reyes is welcoming the sunrise. I like it, but there's something nagging me and I can't put my finger on it. Any suggestions? Josselin

Roch222 ( ) posted Tue, 14 January 2003 at 12:57 AM

Very Nice, Great Texture I think maybe its some shadow that's missing, and I think the sun should be bigger? Josselin - what are Eggle Reyes? roch222

haloedrain ( ) posted Tue, 14 January 2003 at 1:43 AM

the fog on the bottom left looks kinda funny, like there's some weird shadows on it. Also maybe try adding some wake around the pier thingy. Is that a terrain, btw? It looks really nice. Also maybe give the pier a reason to be there? Unless it's purpose is just so people can go out and watch the Eggle Reyes

Erlik ( ) posted Tue, 14 January 2003 at 2:00 AM

Eagle Rays? Yep, there's a problem with the mist. The straight edge on the left side is weird. And the diagonal shadows, too. Also, what's the reflecting texture in the round bit?

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Zhann ( ) posted Tue, 14 January 2003 at 2:23 AM

Looks like they're flying rays (as in manta rays) correct? Needs some shadow around the observation pier, unless it's out of the water...:)

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ttops ( ) posted Tue, 14 January 2003 at 2:41 AM

I think the word is Eagle Rays. Nice work and I agree with Zhann, the pier seems to be floating above the water line.

Jausse ( ) posted Tue, 14 January 2003 at 4:36 AM

Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=289443&Start=1&Artist=Jausse&ByArtist=Yes

It must be the mist. The pier is supposed to stand above the water, and the reflections on the pier is water as well. Eggle Reyes is the name I gave to a ship I created, because they looked like Eagle Rays. You can see them more clearly if you follow the link. Well, back to the drawing board then ;-) Josselin

lsstrout ( ) posted Tue, 14 January 2003 at 11:59 AM

I think there should be some sort of backlight/underlight on the Eggle Reyes. This would make them stand out a little more. Lin

catlin_mc ( ) posted Thu, 16 January 2003 at 1:08 AM

Its beautiful, soothing image, The only thing I would add is a figure standing at the end of the pier watching the Eggle Reyes fly by. Catlin

lsstrout ( ) posted Thu, 16 January 2003 at 11:50 AM

What about a cat? Lin

Jausse ( ) posted Thu, 16 January 2003 at 11:43 PM

The problem is; my cat is very big, he won't fit in the picture ;-) Josselin

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