Enter Dawn Enter Light No Darkness Creeps Briskly Through Mourn As Daylight Sneeks Into Dusk The True Day Welcoming Heart And Hope And Breaking Away From Pains From Breaks When All Was Lost When Darkness Crept And I Had Forgot About Life About Love To Much Comtempt No Comtemplation of Heart No Soul Attempt When She Came When She Entered The Palace Was Aglow And My Life Now Is Full My Pain Does Not Show No Pain No Darkness Just ME AND MY OWN

Interesting poem, but the lack of punctuation makes it hard for me to understand the rythym and the meaning. Instead of tripping down the poem, a few lines at a time, I find myself tumbling down, out of control. If you don't want to punctuate it, then perhaps putting line breaks between thoughts would help. Cheers!

I'll consider that, but part of the reason I left it unpuncuated as well as the other one I posted was so that the meaning could be interpreted a number of different ways.

You're confusing me. If you say your pain does not show, why does it seem to me that you are trying to get the readers to see your pain? Are you speaking of your dreams?
Should there be more than one interpretation of this piece?
I am trying to get it.... but am one of those, literalist people. Writing is not the same to me as visual art, which can only be interpreted as the beholder can interpret. No one can make me see what I don't want to see. What I think when I see something is only my opinion, even if I don't know why the artist created it. Written expression always makes me want to ask questions. Words are powerful, and full of the possibility of misunderstanding. I like things to be very plainly stated. I probably should not read poems.. What are you saying? What am I saying? Does it matter to you if anyone understands what you really meant, or are you writing just give people an opportunity to voice their opionion of you works? If so, my opinion is that you are feeling deep emotional pain. I hope that I am wrong. ???????????????????????????????????????????????????

Im sorry your confused. Most of what I write is written to be interpreted according to what the reader wants to "hear" Unfortunetly my writings are based on emotional pain, though not always mine.

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