My First attempt at postwork. Anyway here's some background on the picture. The Hero (girl) was a powerful member of an elite assassin group working for a powerful lord in medieval pan-Europe. She is sitting on the grave of her fallen comrade, whom was betrayed by their master and lover. Overcome with grief and self-hatred because of her inability to do anything, she reaches down deep, and pulls up a power and horror that will allow her to exact her revenge upon all those who crossed her. And all those who stood by and let it happen.

3 corrections 1: inspited by the chevele song The Red 2: when i ment lover, i mean that both she and the dead girl were lovers to the Lord 3: pan-europe is a made up place that i use in my stories. it is a post-appocoliptic place that has three zones, Medieval, Techno and White the first two are pritty self explanitory, white is a chirch-run kill everybody else, ultra powerful section. it's called pan-europe because the rest of the continents where pushed into europe and most of the inhabitnets killed. medieval does not have a very strong or dominint religion. but it is under a very strong fuital system and has almost completely rejected tecnologie, beliveing it to be the sorce of the Destruction(as no one is sure what really happend)

I think the postwork really added to the image. It is far 'creepier' than the first verion that I saw. The backround still ends abruptly, you might want to try using a curved ground-to-background prop (Runtime DNA has a free one) or leave it abrupt and make the background a wall (say a stone fence).

Or see if playing around with depth cueing will help. It's comeing along,Gigaroc. SWAMP

thanks for your help, have any more suggestions?