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Subject: La plage... I need your opinion

Jausse opened this issue on Jun 15, 2003 ยท 9 posts
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Jausse ( ) posted Sun, 15 June 2003 at 3:43 PM ยท edited Tue, 26 November 2024 at 9:16 PM

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Well, I posted this today, and I really need some feedback on it. Thanks. Josselin

catlin_mc ( ) posted Sun, 15 June 2003 at 4:32 PM

The only thing I think could do with some alteration is the three rock in the middle distance. IMO, they should be a bit more rugged whereas at the moment they all look the same. Your seaweed looks like real seaweed, your flying machines are brill and on the whole I like your image very much. Catlin

Slakker ( ) posted Sun, 15 June 2003 at 4:38 PM

those are some trippy flying machines. I like the postwork canvas effect you did, it adds to the feel.

RodsArt ( ) posted Sun, 15 June 2003 at 5:04 PM

Overall image is very well done, The center stone furthest out could be removed.(it's a little busy)

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sailor_ed ( ) posted Sun, 15 June 2003 at 10:17 PM

I like this picture and its contrast of the fantasy and reality. Ships vs rocks and seaweed. (Seaweed is perfect!) I agree though that something is wrong with the three rocks. I would stagger them from middleground to background or something. Might give a diagonal to lead us in. Right now they are too linear. IMHO

MuddyGrub ( ) posted Sun, 15 June 2003 at 11:48 PM

Great scene. The large rock on the left looks like a face to me. Cool.

Jausse ( ) posted Mon, 16 June 2003 at 12:00 AM

Thanks. Yes, the large rock looks like a head because I enhanced the effect in postwork: it looked vaguely like a head - I could see the eyes and part of the nose. So I decided to edit it a bit. I'm glad someone noticed. Josselin

Rayraz ( ) posted Mon, 16 June 2003 at 11:51 AM

The large rock looks really good. How did you make it? As for the composition; the shape of the rocks in the water have to be less similar. The middle rock of the three at the back should either be small and placed just a little to the left and front or back or removed completely.

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Jausse ( ) posted Mon, 16 June 2003 at 12:17 PM

I know about the rocks. The large one is simply a terrain I rotated on the Z axis. Josselin

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