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Subject: Sept Challenge Entry...

RodsArt opened this issue on Sep 16, 2003 · 6 posts
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RodsArt ( ) posted Tue, 16 September 2003 at 6:54 AM · edited Fri, 22 November 2024 at 10:20 AM

Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=495022&Start=1&Sectionid=2&filter_genre_id=0&WhatsNe

Challenge Entry will be up soon, so I'm linking to a version with more postwork I uploaded to the gallery. Thanks Zhann, & Thanks for any comments.

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Svaelt ( ) posted Tue, 16 September 2003 at 8:05 AM

That's awsome! I haven't even made up my mind for what historical event to portrait, and you have already finnished a masterpiece! BRAVO!

madmax_br5 ( ) posted Tue, 16 September 2003 at 9:25 AM

Looks great! But there is one small compositional flaw that I thikn when improved will make it even better. As you can see, the rider is riding to the left. As it is now, he is close the the left side of the picture, so the viewer is pushed out of the frame of the composition because they are being chased by the rider. You always want to lead the eyes into the composition. (Most of this is from reading a really good online landscape composition tutorial here: http://www.wetcanvas.com/Articles2/135/120/ ) I suggest either turning the horse and rider around, or if you like them this direction, move them to the right third of the frame. Then you might want to swing the camera up, left, and overhead a bit to reveal more of the rider (as he will be smaller and more obscured by the rock when h is moved back to the right side) My 2C.

Zhann ( ) posted Tue, 16 September 2003 at 4:34 PM

Looks really terrific and I agree with Madmax on the compositional flaw.

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catlin_mc ( ) posted Tue, 16 September 2003 at 8:42 PM

Yup, I got to agree with the others on the positioning but apart from that it is a very good image. Good luck with the challenge. 8) Catlin

Zhann ( ) posted Tue, 16 September 2003 at 9:13 PM

Let's see, where'd I put that zepplin model, hmmm,....;)

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