Like the girl and the way you've done the clothes, but I think the boy looks too much like a girl. (posette with breast morphs?) Also their hands and feet look out of proportion. The girl's hair and dress look great though.

Maybe it's just the lighting, but they look like a pair of child-vampires to me... Century old children out for bloodshed... And they look like sisters too...

Actually Charlie I had Claudia from Interview with a Vampire in mind when I designed them. He is supposed to be a little feminin because he is her twin

I think they look great. To be honest, I have not seen any children in Poser that looked right. Your's come closets by far. Keep at it. By the way, how are you comming along on the unicorn texture? I emailed you but never heard back. Rob

Rob I was having problems with my modem. I lost the Unicorn object and your emails I am so sorry!!

No problem. If you are still interested in hosting the file and making a texture I can upload the file again to you. If you would rather not, that's okay too. Just let me know. Thanks, Rob

The hands seem too big for me

Hi Una, Move the boys nipples down and outward toward the curve at the bottom of the pectoral muscles a little. That will make him look more masculine. Good start! (Best thing to do: grab some guy, rip his shirt off and examine his chest. Hey! It's all in the name of art...) =};-}>

Great work so far! Make the hands slimmer and more tender. And yes, the boy's chest is too feminin. Thorne's tip for this sounds good to me, so I'd give it a try if I where you. I'd like to see both kids in an anti-aliased render next! - wal

Just a note re: him being her twin, male/female twins don't come from the same egg, so he should look as masculine as any other boy. His being her twin wouldn't affect his masculine appearance. He could still resemble her, like any other brother and sister. I think his face looks more like an adult woman, rather than a boy. Maybe try some morphs to fix the eyes a bit. It almost looks like he has eye makeup on. Sorry, for the seemingly negative comments. I do think, however, this this is a badly needed set for our Poser people. Preadolescent children are sorely missing. Thanks for a great idea. I think you're really on the right track. Keep going! Melanie

You're kidding, Uthena! My first thought when I saw the girl was of the little girl from "The Vampire Lestat" (I couldn't remember her name at the time though)...