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Subject: Last Chance challange WIP- comments needed


Kapoho ( ) posted Tue, 27 January 2004 at 5:57 PM · edited Fri, 15 November 2024 at 3:59 PM

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This is nearing the deadline, trying to get a few more improvements before its over. Comments and Suggestions are most appreciated.


corys311 ( ) posted Tue, 27 January 2004 at 9:35 PM

I like this image a lot, and I think it's improved from the last WIP you posted... It's got everything (model-wise) that it needs in order to be uncluttered yet still full, if that makes sense. I think for me the focal point of the image (which in the last WIP I saw was the last thing i noticed) is that flowing plant in the far background, which I think could be remedied by aiming and focusing the light beam there back toward the plant in the foreground. I think that one modification could really set the image off! Right now it's looking great though! Cory


Flak ( ) posted Tue, 27 January 2004 at 9:36 PM

I like your undersea structures and that. Also, I really like your depth haze and the colours. My only suggestions would be to reduce some of the brightness coming from the light that you can see through the hole in the coral in the midle of the pic, but thats a personal taste kind of thing. Also, maybe try making the edges of the solid light a little softer and not so sharp. Apart from that, nice job.

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MuddyGrub ( ) posted Tue, 27 January 2004 at 10:03 PM

Fantastic landscape and the water color is great. The light beam looks really strong, yet where it hits the ground there is no noticeable brightening. Maybe some light there would be good.


Melansian_Mentat ( ) posted Wed, 28 January 2004 at 12:28 AM

Perhaps you might change the bottom of the coral in the foreground: it looks rather cut off. Other than that, a very good image!


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