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Bryce F.A.Q (Last Updated: 2024 Nov 26 4:28 pm)
Of course, it could just be me, but i find that the light glinting off the ships makes them almost invisible to me. Even after seeing the version in this thread i had a hard time seeing them in the other version. At first, i didn't see either of them. I thought, how could this be a pursuit without the ships? After actively looking for them, i was able to see them. It took longer to find the one in the back.
I mean the big, honking, glaring flares, the rays of which radiate out over the bodies of the ships, cutting down on my ability to make out their forms. I get that they're in high motion and are blurry for that reason... which is more of a reason to make sure they're easily readable otherwise. Know what i mean?
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I agree that it loses something. The ship in the back is pretty much lost. I was thinking along the lines of something in the middle, mysef. Perhaps the lights you talked about but then eliminated. I think that might be helpful (as well as a little more light on the ship in back) to make each one noticeable (via the contrast of the lights against the surrounding darkness) and yet not obscure our view. How does that sound?
Both ships are added in post (actually it's the same render). SO the lighting isn't consistent with the rest of the scene anyway. If I render again using this theme I'll try something different. To be honest, I don't mind losing the ship. I didn't go into it with the view to adding any ships at all. The title was to fit what I ended up with. It was a toss up whether I put them in at all. The city was the original star. Anyway, all in all I'm pretty happy. I think it's one of my better renders.
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