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Subject: Need some feedback on a WIP plz

thcseller opened this issue on Sep 16, 2004 · 8 posts
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thcseller ( ) posted Thu, 16 September 2004 at 11:15 PM · edited Wed, 13 November 2024 at 8:39 PM

Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/photos/GAL_200409/GalleryImage765494.jpg

This is a WIP of a project im doing right now. Its far from finished but i thought it was worth posting. Feedback would be appreciated... Keyboard and chair are from free stuff section here. Rest including textures is me.

Jaymonjay ( ) posted Thu, 16 September 2004 at 11:26 PM

Attached Link: http://www.sams3d.com

Looks good so far. Nice and bright, but pleasant to look at. You have some funny poly-artifacts at the edges of the monitor. That keyboard model is good, but if you want a textured one, check out the Freebie at SAMS3D. Look forward to seeing this progress!

draculaz ( ) posted Thu, 16 September 2004 at 11:29 PM

did you do that with terrains? nice job :)

pogmahone ( ) posted Fri, 17 September 2004 at 2:00 AM

tee hee - my desk doesn't look like that!! clutter all over the place. The glass desktop works very well. I wonder if texturing would help to disguise the artifacts? I can see them in the ashtray as well. Once you add a light-source and texture the walls I think it'll look very good :o)

alexsm ( ) posted Fri, 17 September 2004 at 2:08 AM

How u do the effect of steam ? :)

erosiaart ( ) posted Fri, 17 September 2004 at 6:52 AM

I agree with pog..add the light..texture the walls.. it looks really flat. Remove that round brown thinggy on the side.. it seems like you tried showing the chair.. but it's not working here..too round a back..and the color of the seat too much the same as the floor. Reduce the spot light on the keyboard.. damn bright plonk in the middle. Add a wisp of smoke on the cigarette..it looks like a newly lit one.. I love the water texture of the glass though..and btw..neat desktop..I gather you really tidy? ;-)

TheBryster ( ) posted Fri, 17 September 2004 at 7:37 AM
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Yup! Thought I recognised that keyboard.....Nice to see it being used! The whole desktop looks like its made of water...great concept!

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thcseller ( ) posted Fri, 17 September 2004 at 9:56 AM · edited Fri, 17 September 2004 at 10:01 AM

Thanx A LOT for comments ppl. It will help to finish it =)
some answers:
-yes almost everything is made of terrains (thats why there is that glitch on the side of the comp =/ )

-The steam over the coffe is 2 spheres with modified by me Bryce's cloud mat

-About the chair, well this was only a wip.. i plan on doing a more general view of the whole room so the chair wont only be a brown spot at right =)

-The lighting isnt done at all (just putted 4 radials so i can see...

-Just threw a green on the walls.. Im gonna texture it lata

-About the wisp of smoke comin from cigarette, well i tried doing it in bryce but it was slowing my comp too much.. ill just postwork it in PS

Message edited on: 09/17/2004 10:01

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