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Subject: How bad is this...honestly


Zacko ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 7:43 AM · edited Sun, 24 November 2024 at 5:48 AM

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Helloooooo... Yesterday i was a friends sons baptism. There I met Klara, another friends child and she is just tooooo cute so I took a little picture against her will. But the original was sooooo boring so i played a little with it in Photoshop....now heres the question...did i play too much? Come on people....be cruel...

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
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Andreas

Mystic Pic


Onslow ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 7:53 AM

I would have stopped at replacing the background.

And every one said, 'If we only live,
We too will go to sea in a Sieve,---
To the hills of the Chankly Bore!'
Far and few, far and few, Are the lands where the Jumblies live;
Their heads are green, and their hands are blue, And they went to sea in a Sieve.

Edward Lear
http://www.nonsenselit.org/Lear/ns/jumblies.html


Zacko ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 7:58 AM

You are probably right...had some unwanted effects masking it...and then i went overboard...which i usually do :o( I shall try that though, just replacing the background. Somehow, LOL.

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
____________________

Andreas

Mystic Pic


gwfa ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 7:59 AM

same as Onslow - now it is kind of artificial (not bad though...)


Gerald



Michelle A. ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 8:02 AM

Interesting to see the before and after..... Hmmmmm.... maybe a little overboard on the postwork, but the original has a lot of distractions in it..... Cute kid!

I am, therefore I create.......
--- michelleamarante.com


Onslow ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 8:13 AM

Attached Link: http://www.dcmag.co.uk/news/article/mps/UAN/398/v/1/sp/

You could replace with studio type backdrop as per link .

And every one said, 'If we only live,
We too will go to sea in a Sieve,---
To the hills of the Chankly Bore!'
Far and few, far and few, Are the lands where the Jumblies live;
Their heads are green, and their hands are blue, And they went to sea in a Sieve.

Edward Lear
http://www.nonsenselit.org/Lear/ns/jumblies.html


Zacko ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 9:19 AM

Thanks alot! I shall play around a little bit more with this one later....next project....

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
____________________

Andreas

Mystic Pic


cynlee ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 10:12 AM

would think this would look pretty good large! cropped vertically... i like the red, although the blue would've been fine, maybe tone it down a bit & the darker parts in her hair, bring some of the softness back by layering it back in... her facial tones looks good... & the hairpin flowers could be changed to red to match... worth working on! :]


Zacko ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 10:51 AM

Thank you Cindy #:o)

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
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Andreas

Mystic Pic


cynlee ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 11:15 AM · edited Sun, 20 March 2005 at 11:21 AM

really the more i look at it the more i really like it!! with the red, it matches her lips & her eyes really stand out so blue... you've really got something here imo :] by layering in another one underneath with similar contrast & erasing back you can bring back some of the lightness, detail & softness & still keep the fade to black around the edges, hope that make sense

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Zacko ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 12:01 PM

It makes alot of sense! Thank you for supporting me, LOL. Too bad it came a few minutes too late....i deleted my Photoshop-file before your first reply...sigh...me need to redo it...sigh even more....ah well....thanks anyway, ill have another go at it some other day. Feels good though knowing someone shared my taste ;o)

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
____________________

Andreas

Mystic Pic


tvernuccio ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 12:30 PM

sorry, Andreas, but i just LOVE the original!!!! i agree with Richard...would have stopped after getting rid of the background. she's such an adorable kid, and i LOVE her hair...always did love hair that color!!! in your postworked version, i think the hair is not flattering to her. i guess that's just all about personal taste though. the other thing i like about the original is how that blue sweater matches her eyes. i also like the first one better because she looks natural. in the 2nd one it kinda looks like she's wearing lipstick, and i don't like to see that on kids. again, that's just me. now this will probably sound silly, but the other thing i like about the first one are those splotches on her face. you know...it's like she just finished running around or doing some activity...or maybe she just woke up. maybe with Cindy's advice, you can make the 2nd one look a bit more natural. sorry, Andreas!!!! :( am curious to see how you rework it though!


Zacko ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 12:56 PM · edited Sun, 20 March 2005 at 12:59 PM

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Okey...how about this? I suppose i can do something about her lipstick as well #:O) Kinda hard recovering that haircolour now though without going insane with the marque-tool, lol. Anyway, i really appriciate all your advice. Im having quite fun here actually.

Message edited on: 03/20/2005 12:59

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
____________________

Andreas

Mystic Pic


ReBorneUK ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 1:14 PM

Halfway down the thread I was being my usually controversial self by thinking the second one was better. I really prefer it, even though I go against the majority! (3k?) But this last one - yeah that's REALLY kewl!! Damn, don't let Joe Public see it, or they'll be throwing their boring kids' pics at you forever!! The only ickle comment I have is at the marked difference between her face and her neck where they meet in the pic - they neck is just too harsh for my liking. That's only my opinion, though. (",)


cynlee ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 1:52 PM

she looks wonderful! maybe just a bit darker on the backgd as it seems a little too much red, wonder how dark blue would look... like mike, just an opinion... you've really taken this far & have done a splendid job of it! I hope you will post it :]


tvernuccio ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 2:15 PM

Wow!!!! Now this looks a LOT better! She looks sooooo much better against that gorgeous background!! how did you do that? did you use that studio type backdrop that Richard suggested? i think Cindy may be right...maybe just i tiny bit darker background might make this look even better!!! the lipstick looks a lot better here too! not as harsh. what did you do to fix that? and i see you made her hair look better too!!! You said it's hard to recover the hair color, but whatever you did certainly does make her hair look a lot better than in your 1st postworked version! the tones seem to be more evened out. sorry, hard to describe! i also really like that subtle outline or shadow that's around her!!! not sure exactly what that is but it looks great! And the framing is perfect!!! agree with Mike on this...you show this one off you're gonna get all kinds of people asking you for help doing their kids' portraits!!! ok...forget the original...you've sold me on this one!!! high 5s Andreas!!!! :)


Zacko ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 2:21 PM

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Okay, now ive changed the background to be dark blue (i think, bad screen on this laptop), i also used the burn tool to create a better transission between her chin and neck. And finally i washed away some of her lipstick. Sooooo....am i slowly getting there? Who is Joe Public by the way....me=swedish....la la la...

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
____________________

Andreas

Mystic Pic


ReBorneUK ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 2:23 PM

By George, I think He's got it!!! (",) and don't even ASK who George is ;-)


Zacko ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 2:24 PM

LOL...again i cross-post with you Sheila!!! No, i never used that background drop...that required reading, and im not to kean on that, LOL.

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
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Andreas

Mystic Pic


cynlee ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 2:30 PM

hehe... you're going to make me get pickey, ahhhh... i do like the blue but even darker, like the outer rim of her iris & the lips as they were in the red backgd... might change monitors if i was you... personally i can never see the color/brightness on my laptop as well as my desktop but maybe yours is different :]


tvernuccio ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 2:32 PM

like the red background and the red lipstick better i think!!! when i get home from work i'll have more time to look, but that red background and the lipstick looks so dramatic!! i know i said i don't like lipstick, but in this one it looks great! LOL!!!! but both are great!!!!!!laterzzzzzz.....duty calls. must go to work!


Zacko ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 2:45 PM

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YOU PEOPLE WILL BE THE DEATH OF ME, LOL!!!! Okay, shall we try it again then...darker background, lipstick back on...sooooo what do you think now? I have to agree with Sheila though, i liked the red background better....

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
____________________

Andreas

Mystic Pic


cynlee ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 2:54 PM

LOL!!! oh gawd, i'm so sorry that's too vivid of a blue for my taste... it's difficult to comment on someone else's WIP, so much is trial & error... hard to explain... if you like the red, please, pleeeeeeeease do the red :]


Zacko ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 2:57 PM

Vivid eh...hmmm..back to work i suppose then #:op

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
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Andreas

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Zacko ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 3:12 PM

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Sigh...how about this one? Anything to please you Cindy #;o)

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
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Andreas

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ReBorneUK ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 3:35 PM

I DEFINATELY prefer the first blue background one ;-) (",)


wackiej ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 3:40 PM

I like #17 best. I would not make up her face/lips so much because she looses too much innocence.


Zacko ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 3:44 PM

Sigh....inhales....sigh....

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
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Andreas

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tibet2004uk ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 4:47 PM

I definetely prefer the one with the dark red background Andreas!! Cute shot!


tvernuccio ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 10:55 PM

Poor Andreas!!!! You're probably in your bed tossing and turning with nightmares about this image!!!! LOL! ok, i've studied these some more and i'm still drawn to that one with the red background!!! i know i said i didn't like the lipstick initially, but when i compare it to the others i DO like the lipstick since you changed it from the one in #1. of the blue backgrounds, i like the last one the best. but for some reason, i just prefer the red background one. maybe it has something to do with her eyes contrasting against the red? dunno. oh yeah, uh...Andreas...did you notice she has a wee bit of red in her eyes that you might like to fix????? sheepish grins Sorrrrrrrrr-eeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!! you really did an awesome job with this!!!! and whichever one you choose will be just fine!!!! it's YOUR picture and we all have difference preferences...(as you noticed!!!!) :)


Zacko ( ) posted Sun, 20 March 2005 at 11:22 PM

LOL, yes Sheila.....so I noticed ;o) Im with you and Pascale actually. I too prefer the red one....sigh...fix it when i get home from work #:O)

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
____________________

Andreas

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tibet2004uk ( ) posted Mon, 21 March 2005 at 8:21 AM

A 'lil bit of red in her eyes??? Oh my! I might need glasses but...I can't see it! :(


Zacko ( ) posted Mon, 21 March 2005 at 8:54 AM

Ssshh...neither can I Pascale..but play along..Sheila seems to worry about her sight lately so we shouldnt worry her too much ;o)

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
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Andreas

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Zacko ( ) posted Mon, 21 March 2005 at 10:53 AM

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Okay.....just so you all know, I wont play anymore with this one. I will go with Pascale and Sheilas opinion and choose the red background. This is the finished result....at least I think it looks better than the original....thanks for all your help and advice. Believe it or not, but i did actually have alot of fun #:o) And now for the next question...is it good enough to upload, LOL. And if so, should i do a before-after collage? Blah blah blah...rambling...coffee...mmmm...see ya....

How come we say 'It's colder than hell outside' when isn't it realistically always colder than hell since hell is supposed to be fire and brimstone?
____________________

Andreas

Mystic Pic


tibet2004uk ( ) posted Mon, 21 March 2005 at 11:28 AM

LMAO!! Of course! I can see it now!! Silly me!! ;) As for good enough to upload, I'm afraid u gonna have to be the judge of that dear! I know, I wasn't very helpful here! :(


tvernuccio ( ) posted Tue, 22 March 2005 at 8:25 AM

sigh my eyes must be REALLY bad!!! Andreas, i totally love it, and if it were ME, I would definitely upload it in my gallery!!!!! a before & after collage would be a cool thing to show too!!! :) You really did great!!!!!!!!


evielouise ( ) posted Fri, 25 March 2005 at 9:45 PM

The last one on 3-21 w/the red back is great and I think as far as the lipstick I like it lighter as she is a young girl and it makes her look better w/the light color lips not too light though lol otherwise this last one would be my favorite. great job sheis a beauty


evielouise ( ) posted Fri, 25 March 2005 at 9:45 PM

The last one on 3-21 w/the red back is great and I think as far as the lipstick I like it lighter as she is a young girl and it makes her look better w/the light color lips not too light though lol otherwise this last one would be my favorite. great job she is a beauty


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