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Photography F.A.Q (Last Updated: 2024 Nov 26 6:56 am)
Secong one is kind of over exposed, with a shadowing issue.Though it si a bit better focused than number1. Pay attention to your signature too.Hanging off the frame. OK that's straight in MHO like you asked. Strong point is you cropped it right,and the thorn on #2
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The 1st one has that out of focus vine in the foreground that really distracts me! The 2nd one is a much better composition! (But I still find that vine distracting - just not as much as in the 1st image) As Doug stated...using the curves function would really bring out the veiny details in that leaf! With your permission... I could post some examples! Just let me know! L8r! Joe
I agree with 2nd being the best.
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Definately more detail in the leaf. But you need to work on your selection skills. Alot of dark patches around the leaf. Not good.
What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies. -
Aristotle
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In this case you'll probably benefit from your color layers to make a mask. If you look into the green layer the leaf probably sticks out against an almost black background. That should help with the masking.
What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies. -
Aristotle
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Glass Eye Photography =- -= My Rendo Gallery =-
ok...after reading :P
I agree that though the composition is better on the second one, it lacks some depth in colour department. What do you use to edit with? I use Photoshop and the best tool I've found in that is a Curves Adjustment Layer.
The image attached was modified in about 1 minute with a curves adjustment layer. Its not what Im saying you should do with the image, but an example of the effect you can acheive without messing about with selecting one element of the image with a selection tool. I hope you dont mind me fiddling with yor image ;)
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