Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=1088207&Start=1&Artist=darkness%5F02&ByArtist=Yes

hello all... Well been working on one of my new projects... I'm going into the field of animation... and here my first big try at it... well I hope you all enjoy it and hope that you can give me some helpfuly advice on what I should be doing now... and on ways to make it better... many thanks Darkness...

Looks good, reminds me of Total Recall for some reason. It's just a pity Bryce doesn't have motion blur. Len.

Nice. Gotta tutorial? I love the smooth way the little car twists round before landing. Very nice indeed.

Well done darkness. One point on it though, maybe next one you do with haze/fog/smoke in it you can make that move as well..if you notice the clouding or what ever it is in yours doesn't move..just an idea for you to work on :)

Nicely done, CrazyDawg's fog advice is wise.

There was just one thing I noticed, the tracks that the 'train' moves along, seem to be totally without support, I mean no struts to the ground, no bed for the tracks to sit on, no sci-fi motor to hold it suspended, nothing. That sort of bothered me as I looked at it. Made the train look too light to be more than a kid's toy. I don't know if there's a limitation on the length of animation (probably is) but I think it would look less jumpy if the train had totally disappeared before the loop began again. (car too, but that might take too much) Just a couple of thoughts...