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Subject: The Cancer of Hate

XoxoTree opened this issue on Dec 17, 2005 · 3 posts
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XoxoTree ( ) posted Sat, 17 December 2005 at 2:49 AM · edited Thu, 28 November 2024 at 9:29 AM

The Cancer of Hate A cancer grows in us all It starts from the brain as actions without thought And grows and stretches through our veins Its vines it reaches our hearts with pain And there it is planted to drive us insane In able to reason with justice only judgment There in our hearts it kills a piece of our soul Slowly it separates us from one and then another Once our hearts were born to love our brother And then in just a moment of misunderstood Rather than accepting who we are Finding easier to dislike by far To hate is fear To love is being there Cleanse our hearts of hatred with love Through faith and hope shed tears Live life as love not as we hate For all will not be given through hate But love will mend a heart without soul Releases the cancer of hate

"One Oneness One"

DreamersWish ( ) posted Sat, 17 December 2005 at 9:07 PM

What a very thought provoking piece of writing! Very good use of metaphores(I believe that is what it is called). I do see what you mean and feel here and tend to agree with it. Very nice work!

TallPockets ( ) posted Sun, 18 December 2005 at 2:30 PM

Methinks hate is a 'learned' behavior. Thus, it can be 'unlearned'. Wonderful piece. Get thee to your gallery and keep writing! TallPockets.

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