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Subject: My ShortFilm "Godspeed" Teaser

Valezart opened this issue on Jan 25, 2006 · 7 posts
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Valezart ( ) posted Wed, 25 January 2006 at 1:03 AM · edited Thu, 21 November 2024 at 11:27 AM

Attached Link: http://www.demianfox.com/zona.php?id=godspeed

This is my first movie created in poser and vue.

TEASER A)
http://www.demianfox.com/zona.php?id=godspeed
http://godspeed.4d2.net/

I am beginner, the total duration comes to 20m. It seems easy but it is not it, I am single with the project and my PC sometimes crashes! but it is my dream...

Greetings & Thanks!

Message edited on: 01/25/2006 01:04

nemirc ( ) posted Wed, 25 January 2006 at 9:16 AM

Very nice. Too bad there are not many "character animation shots". One thing I noticed is that on the shot of the young Kyra (the "wavy hair" shot) has some shadow flickering. I can't say anything about the sound because I am not at home and I don't have speakers here O_O!

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Bobasaur ( ) posted Wed, 25 January 2006 at 12:06 PM

Very nice work. Somehow I don't think you're a beginner - your work is far to advanced for you to be called that.

Before they made me they broke the mold!
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Miss Nancy ( ) posted Thu, 26 January 2006 at 11:35 PM

muy bien hecho! my only suggestions are: have the eagle's feathers ruffle slightly in the wind make its head snap from left to right more crisply make the eagle's eyes blink at least twice add some specular shine/reflection to the eagle's eyes


pentamiter_beastmete ( ) posted Fri, 27 January 2006 at 4:33 AM

Nice eye candy, would be nice to see some stuff moving rather than "floating", but keep going.

luvver_3d ( ) posted Fri, 27 January 2006 at 5:31 PM · edited Fri, 27 January 2006 at 5:32 PM

From what I can tell, it seems you're on to something cool here. The ethereal lighting helps enhance the mood, which works for me. The parts that don't seem to work are the ones you aren't showing very much of. The girl's hair movement, for instance, seems stiff and unnatural, but I can't really tell for sure since you only show glimpses of it.

The eagles's motion is far too smooth and slow. If you watch footage of real eagles, or any bird for that matter, their head movement is very quick, not at all like human head movement.

Message edited on: 01/27/2006 17:32

Valezart ( ) posted Tue, 31 January 2006 at 1:30 PM

Thanks for all comments!! Any suggestion will be received well friends! Greetings :)

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