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Subject: I've got a water challenge wip!


Ang25 ( ) posted Sat, 18 March 2006 at 8:30 PM · edited Mon, 25 November 2024 at 8:50 AM

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I actually feel like this one will get completed :) so I'm a bit happy. Just need to find a few more things to add to it. Any crits are welcome. Especially if theres like a real bad error in it that I've missed, lol. OH almost forgot, its gonna be called 'the other side of the falls'. Thanks for looking :) oh and does anyone besides me think that the glare in the bottom right looks like a gremlin? I'll be taking that out in postwork.


skiwillgee ( ) posted Sat, 18 March 2006 at 8:41 PM

What a brilliant concept.


FranOnTheEdge ( ) posted Sat, 18 March 2006 at 9:12 PM

Nope, doesn't look like a gremlin to me, looks like water splashing... you might think about adding a few more, especially where the water is broken up around the rocks. Love the perspective you have there.

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Ang25 ( ) posted Sat, 18 March 2006 at 10:12 PM

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Well, I've added a few critters. Here's what I've got so far.


xenic101 ( ) posted Sat, 18 March 2006 at 11:02 PM

How about a little mist or spray just over the edge?


bikermouse ( ) posted Sun, 19 March 2006 at 2:53 AM

Now it looks like two gremlins dancing. Good work!!


TheBryster ( ) posted Sun, 19 March 2006 at 6:06 AM
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Way to go, Ang! Very imaginative idea!

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RodsArt ( ) posted Sun, 19 March 2006 at 7:05 AM

Great concept & execution Ang!

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Ang25 ( ) posted Sun, 19 March 2006 at 7:43 AM

Thanks everybody :) @Bikermouse, Thank you, I'm so glad I'm not the only one who can see them! @xen and Fran, yup good ideas, thanks, I'll will work on them also. Umm are the fish recognisible in the second image? Thanks again for the comments.


marcfx ( ) posted Sun, 19 March 2006 at 8:26 AM

I love the Dragonfly too, adds to the realism. well done :)


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pumecobann ( ) posted Sun, 19 March 2006 at 9:09 AM

Very nice!

As for suggestions, why not put some froth where the water hits the stones that are poking-out of the water. It could give more an impression of the water tricking downwards.

Len.
(Never noticed the fish until you mentioned them)

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FranOnTheEdge ( ) posted Sun, 19 March 2006 at 12:11 PM

Tried and tried, but I can't see any fish. Nice dragonfly though, and I agree about the spray and froth near the rocks, and you might add some disturbance in the water where the rocks break the water up. This would also serve to indicate the direction of flow, because there isn't much at present, and the angle COULD just be due to camera angle as it is. I do like this idea, it's a very interesting angle to choose.

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Ang25 ( ) posted Sun, 19 March 2006 at 12:53 PM

:-D there's 3 fish in there. LOL, one of my favorite things to do at streams is to look for the fish. At first is seems there are none, but if you watch patiently, you start to spot them. I think the water disturbance and/or froth will have to be done in post work. I seem to have a hard time doing that with terrains.


sackrat ( ) posted Sun, 19 March 2006 at 1:15 PM

Very nice Ang !

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pumecobann ( ) posted Sun, 19 March 2006 at 1:55 PM

BTW, Ang, when I said froth; I also meant disturbance where the water hit's the rock.
My brain just went flat-line, and I couldn't find the correct terminology.

Len.
(It happens)

The wait can be horrific, but the outcome can be worse - pumeco 2006


Ang25 ( ) posted Sun, 19 March 2006 at 2:41 PM

LOL Len, I like the term frothy, sounds more like an ale drink ;)


Quest ( ) posted Sun, 19 March 2006 at 5:38 PM

Very nice indeed Ang, I like it. I agree also about the froth ahhhh...not too sure about the ale though more like whip cream to my mind. ;)


Ang25 ( ) posted Sun, 19 March 2006 at 6:01 PM

LOL, Ok whip cream. :^D


TheBryster ( ) posted Mon, 20 March 2006 at 7:49 AM
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There she goes again with the whips!

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Ang25 ( ) posted Mon, 20 March 2006 at 6:19 PM

Er hemm, if you notice, I mentioned Ale, not Whips lol. Well I wasn't the first to mention it.
Ang tries to look innocent


FranOnTheEdge ( ) posted Tue, 21 March 2006 at 6:54 AM

And fails. Lol!

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