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Subject: WIP: Adobe Dwellings


jasonmit ( ) posted Tue, 11 December 2007 at 3:21 AM · edited Wed, 27 November 2024 at 7:31 PM

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You ever work on an image and not know if it's finished? That's my problem with this one.

Thoughts?


pauljs75 ( ) posted Tue, 11 December 2007 at 7:55 AM

Looks ok as an environment. Just nothing in particular to draw focus anywhere.


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SndCastie ( ) posted Tue, 11 December 2007 at 9:17 AM

looking good but have to agree with pauljs it needs somethng more to draw the eye.


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orbital ( ) posted Tue, 11 December 2007 at 9:54 AM

Jason, I'd drop the camera down to almost floor level, so the viewer is almost looking up to give a more interesting pov. Then maybe add some more details outside the buildings to make it look like someone lives there. Things like pots and pans etc. 
Alternatively you could try a different approach by having the buildings either side of a path. So the eye is drawn along the path towards the rock formations beyond the dwellings.

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bobbystahr ( ) posted Tue, 11 December 2007 at 10:36 AM · edited Tue, 11 December 2007 at 10:38 AM

AWATA [AgreeWithAllTheAbove]..Plus I'd pull the camera back a bit and maybe move everything around a bit to take advantage of the contrast 'tween the straight lines of the adobe houses and the wildly organic shapes of the mojo-esque shapes in the background.. ...

 

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I see a sound
and try to write it down
Sometimes they come out very soft
Tinkling light sound
The Sun comes up again



 

 

 

 

 


pakled ( ) posted Tue, 11 December 2007 at 6:44 PM

and a little postwork in Photoshop (if you're really in an Adobe mood...;)

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jasonmit ( ) posted Tue, 11 December 2007 at 6:57 PM

Quote - Jason, I'd drop the camera down to almost floor level, so the viewer is almost looking up to give a more interesting pov. Then maybe add some more details outside the buildings to make it look like someone lives there. Things like pots and pans etc. 
Alternatively you could try a different approach by having the buildings either side of a path. So the eye is drawn along the path towards the rock formations beyond the dwellings.

The details are somewhat there (more noticeable in full size) ... a couple baskets in front of left adobe and a pitcher and dish in front of the right adobe.


jasonmit ( ) posted Tue, 11 December 2007 at 7:00 PM

Quote - and a little postwork in Photoshop (if you're really in an Adobe mood...;)

Unless it's a quick filter, my Photoshop skills are non-existent. lol


bobbystahr ( ) posted Tue, 11 December 2007 at 10:09 PM

*"if you're really in an Adobe mood...;)"

Got me there...green tea all over my mouse pad...LOL...managed to miss the keys this time.. ...

 

Once in a while I look around,
I see a sound
and try to write it down
Sometimes they come out very soft
Tinkling light sound
The Sun comes up again



 

 

 

 

 


orbital ( ) posted Wed, 12 December 2007 at 3:29 AM

Oh yeah sorry Jason, my powers of observation ain't too good lol!

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pakled ( ) posted Wed, 12 December 2007 at 9:57 PM

sorry...as much as I have to load Adobe Photoshop at work, it gets on the brain...;)

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anahl nathrak uth vas betude doth yel dyenvey..;)


UVDan ( ) posted Thu, 13 December 2007 at 6:08 PM
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I think you are missing the general foreground clutter.  Stuff like a clump of dried grass here and there.   Rocks as well scattered about.  Maybe make a small terrain and texture it differently maybe to represent a grassy mound or sandy area.   What time period is being represented here?  If horse and buggy, then maybe a trough and a hitching rack?

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Analog-X64 ( ) posted Fri, 14 December 2007 at 6:29 PM

Maybe the picture needs something to give it action?

  • Buzzards flying in a circle in the distant sky?

  • People walking maybe a horse or two? a Dog?  making it look like a busy town?

  • or break the pots and have a tavern sign on the ground to give an abandoned look.

  • Switch it into a Night time scene and have candle glow coming out of the windows/doors of the sctructure.


jasonmit ( ) posted Sat, 15 December 2007 at 8:19 PM

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I'll add some foreground clutter, but for now I added a donkey.


UVDan ( ) posted Sat, 15 December 2007 at 8:48 PM
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What a great looking donkey.  I can see Jacob Walz getting his provisions for another trip into the Superstition Mountains to work his now famous Lost Dutchman Mine.

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jasonmit ( ) posted Sat, 15 December 2007 at 8:59 PM

Quote - What a great looking donkey.  I can see Jacob Walz getting his provisions for another trip into the Superstition Mountains to work his now famous Lost Dutchman Mine.

Thanks. I live near the Superstition Mountains.  


UVDan ( ) posted Sat, 15 December 2007 at 9:13 PM
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Me too.  I can see them out my window.  Have you ever seen the grizzly bear that stalks across the front face of the mountain?  Some say it is just the play of light and shadow across natural rock formations.  However in years past,  making shadow signs to mark the way to the Kings treasure was well practiced among the Spaniards here on his behalf.  I believe that in far more ancient days King Solomon had his miners here as well.  The treasure was secreted at Victorio Mountain in New Mexico before making the journey back to the old world.

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