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Subject: Rate my Expression


Photopium ( ) posted Wed, 15 July 2009 at 2:30 PM · edited Mon, 25 November 2024 at 9:39 PM

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Finally, some realistic expressions.  Essentially, Girl 4 expressions mixed with ++ and Base.


geep ( ) posted Wed, 15 July 2009 at 2:37 PM

That looks like, um, er, Alan Ald ... no, I mean Uma Thur ... Nah, maybe not. :sad:

Lookin' good. 👍

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dr geep
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IsaoShi ( ) posted Wed, 15 July 2009 at 3:06 PM · edited Wed, 15 July 2009 at 3:08 PM

The only thing I would say is that a wide smile like this in reality tends to stretch the upper lip into a straighter line and make it thinner. Reference photos will confirm this in most cases.

The curvature and fullness of her upper lip here gives me the impression that she is tensing the muscles between lip and nose into a slight 'snarl', displaying a bit too much of the upper teeth.

But that's just the way I see it.

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LaurieA ( ) posted Wed, 15 July 2009 at 3:14 PM · edited Wed, 15 July 2009 at 3:15 PM

I think the bottom lip has to come up more over the top teeth. If you smile, you'll notice that your bottom lip touches and comes up over the top set of teeth just a smidge. And I would thin the top lip too, bring the center of the top lip down a bit (or better yet the sides up) and wrinkle the nose slightly :o).

Just my thoughts ;o).

Pretty face tho and nice skin! And I LOVE it that she has a normal nose and not one of those teensy weensy abnormal ones (that usually come with thick flabby lips...LOL. Bravo. :o)



MadameX ( ) posted Wed, 15 July 2009 at 4:07 PM

She's very pretty!

When I dial a smile I use the Mouth Narrow morph (negative values) and the Corner Up/Down dial. If I do use any of the smile morphs, it's only a very small value. I feel that the smile morphs distort the mouth too much, so I go for those others and flex the cheeks some under the eyes and in the cheek area. I think it looks more natural that way. 


pjz99 ( ) posted Wed, 15 July 2009 at 4:41 PM

The eyes are a little too close together for the eyebrows, it gives her a sinister look (which maybe you intended, I don't know).  Nose looks great, the curve of the upper lip is a bit too steep though.

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LostinSpaceman ( ) posted Wed, 15 July 2009 at 6:01 PM

She looks like she smells rotten eggs. If that's what you were going for it's excellent.


DarkEdge ( ) posted Wed, 15 July 2009 at 6:49 PM · edited Wed, 15 July 2009 at 6:52 PM

The upper lip is a problem, everything else looks good to me.

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LBT ( ) posted Thu, 16 July 2009 at 4:18 PM

It looks like she's about to let rip a tart sarcasm.  If that''s what you were going for, I'd say you succeeded very well.


Miss Nancy ( ) posted Thu, 16 July 2009 at 5:22 PM

I would rate it 3.5 stars out of 5.  I dunno what expression is intended to be displayed, but it's at least 1000X better than no expression IMVHO.



Photopium ( ) posted Thu, 16 July 2009 at 6:04 PM

Well, the point was expressing something.  I guess I accomplished that, aside from the upper lip.  Maddening work, expressions. 


LaurieA ( ) posted Thu, 16 July 2009 at 6:59 PM

Quote - Well, the point was expressing something.  I guess I accomplished that, aside from the upper lip.  Maddening work, expressions. 

I agree...LOL. Especially Vicky. She's never been nearly as expressive as she could/should be. Miki excels in that department as far as I'm concerned ;).

Laurie



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