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Subject: Suggestions for future renders ?


A-Spot ( ) posted Wed, 12 August 2009 at 1:10 PM · edited Mon, 25 November 2024 at 5:49 PM

Content Advisory! This message contains nudity

Hiya.

Could you folks here at R'osity give me some tips on how to improve my "noir look" and general renders? Would be mighty happy if you try :P

Got two versions, the raw straight-from-Vue picture and the final, edited one...

I Spent 23 Minutes Rendering, And All I Got Was This Lousy Picture;

Girl posing, classic nude - unedited version

Render time 23 minutes on Ultra.

Couple o' minutes in PS turned it into this:

Girl posing, classic nude - edited version

Imagenomic Portraiture handled the softness and darkening, and I did some contrast and the signature...

So, whatcha' think? What turned out well, and what should be totally redone?!

Cheers,

Thomas / A-Spot


ArtPearl ( ) posted Wed, 12 August 2009 at 4:12 PM

First most elementary advice - if you're asking for the advice of "folks here at R'osity" , put the images here. Either in the thread itself (for the laziest of people like me) or at least in the vue gallery.
If the forums of this site are good enough for you to get information from, the galleries should be sufficiently good to post your images in.
I cant be bothered to login to another account to see the images.

"I paint that which comes from the imagination or from dreams, or from an unconscious drive. I photograph the things that I do not wish to paint, the things which already have an existence."
Man Ray, modernist painter
http://artpearl.redbubble.com/


A-Spot ( ) posted Wed, 12 August 2009 at 6:29 PM

Oh, sorry .. tried to when posting it, but couldn't figure out how to do it. Also, sorry for the advisory on dA.

Will fix it tomorrow. Too tired at the moment.


garyandcatherine ( ) posted Thu, 13 August 2009 at 9:47 PM

I would love to give you some advice, but the deviant art site is asking me to create an account first.  Put the images in the gallery here at Rendo and I would love to look at them.


ShawnDriscoll ( ) posted Thu, 13 August 2009 at 9:55 PM

I couldn't really tell much difference between the two.  Both like fine as they are.

www.youtube.com/user/ShawnDriscollCG


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