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Bryce F.A.Q (Last Updated: 2024 Nov 08 7:02 am)
I don't usually critique but...
Haiku , to me, is breaking down a thought , feeling, or event into it's simplest form. I liked your poem. And the picture is perfect for it, except for the blue dolphin thing in the corner. That complicated the page and took my eye off the purity of the main image and your words.
Hope this helps. :>)
No chocolate for days and days, huh?
Oh wow.. gmorning.. lovely post to wake up to! thank you everyone!
.er.. lol.. lots of chocolate in a jar near my computer.. mars, cadbury, marshmallows.. you name it..anyone wants one.. reach out and help yourself to many... the liquer ones are in the fridge..sorry..it gets above 36 deg here..
I've removed the dolphin..that is my signature.. but well.. guess it showed up too clear out there.. ought to have made it tinier and fainter.
airflamered..really?? they put V4 in the model section?? that's a hoot!
bobbystarh, dawnstar.. yup.. i know about the syllables.. that's why i claim to be a terrible poet!
:-p I'll sit and work on it though..later down today..
analog..got what you saying.. yup..i'll make it darker...
thanks a gazillion all of you. hugs...
Very nice. Kinda spooky in a way. Is this for Halloween?
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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster
And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...
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I need your critics! I just uploaded an image in the 2d section..atmosphere/mood. .. *haiku*.. Can you please, please critic it.. really hard?? be mean, be tough..the worse i'll do to you is sulk, throw a pillow at you and refuse tot alk to you for a few days.. oh..and NOT share my chocolate with you for a day or so..btw..as to the categories as to where it fits.. i have no idea where to put it..i did an eeny minney mo.. - sorry..mods..if my url is wrong..can you please correct it?
cheers..
-rosie