Um I'm not sure how to say this so I'm just going to blurt it out. I can't really tell that is a fan. It could be a blind. In fact I originally thought that you took the picture while you and she were hiding in the closet. I was expecting the ax from the bad guy to come crashing through the door any minute. I think you may want to turn the fan toward the viewer a little next time. Oh and unless you don't mine you might want to clone out the lower "treasure trail" of hair. I don't know if you can tell from my critique but I like this a lot. Even thought I might have originally misunderstoof it. Bsteph

A very good effect. The fan gives a differnt modulation to the light than anything else. Center of interest the navel. Critique: ON my 20" monitor, 2" too much top, either light the bust area or omit. A good use of dark (no detail)space.

alpha, Thank you your opinion and comments are always welcome. I hold alot of respect for your work and take your comment as a great complament. Bsteph, it acualy is a tatoo, I though to cover it with makeup originaly, but decided to leave it. I think that the inperfections add charector. Bill, I though about that, the only reason why I didn't crop it was because when i did, the fan was compleetly undecernable. I left it there so that there was enough of the fan to figure out what it was. but somting to play with. -Gabe-