I'm an old timer here but haven't posted in what seems like forever. I started out in the late 90s when I purchased Bryce 3D in the box for somewhere in the neighborhood of $250. And I've been at it ever since, even throwing down cash for Bryce 7Pro before Daz decided to give it away. ;-)

Anyway, here's something I started last year and finally "finished" last weekend. Thought I'd post it and see what folks thought. Critiques welcome as always.  And, the original is larger btw.

cool, love it

Love the lighting can't wait to see the finished one

Great composition and fine use of F/X in the dancing ghost/spirit and the bonfire. But the guy at the bonfire seems to have his feet in the air...other than that quirk a fine image.

Thanks folks for your responses, I really appreciate the input. I'll work on it some more over the next week or so.

Anyone else? I was hoping this would generate a bit of discussion since it's so full of composition flaws. ;-)

You want us to find the 10 mistakes? Indeed, the guy has his feet in the air. I think the dragon is also flying. Now dragons can fly, of course, but this is a strange flight mode so close to the ground.

And I'd like to know what the little red element is supposed to be.

But, it's just being picky; in general it looks very good!

Thanks for the critique. I've been having issues getting those two to look right as the terrain goes downhill from the camera then back uphill just beyond the camp fire which makes them look like they're floating. As for that red bit, it's a random flower. More evident in a larger render. May be too distracting and needs to go.

Thanks again!

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