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She needs to be reflected in the water, also the leaves look odd, like they are hovering. But she looks great. Very beautiful

My only gripe is tone down the breasts... being native american, I get really peeved when people portray our women as these massively tall, busty seductresses... Tone down her boobs man! Other than that, what EA said.

Very beautiful. I would only suggest the feathers look a little too rigid and not 'feathery', seems they should droop a little more. Also, unless they're supposed to be dyed, the colors seem a little too much. Just my opinion. The girl is gorgeous.

Very nice , but I agree the feathers don't look right. She is beautiful!

The breasts are still too much. A young woman with that build would not have breasts like that. They belong to a much heavier and probably much, much older woman. The character, tho, is very beautiful.

Your colors and lighting blend very naturally, except the feathers, as mentioned. Wrapped cloth very nice. Can you match the water ripples on her shadow? Artnik is right, the breasts would be higher and smaller - and her waist not nearly that tiny.

The boobs are just a bit too big and cumbersome for a girl of her size. I don't think Indians had implants ;). Other than that, she looks very nice :). Laurie

Native American Cheesecake! i guess that's what you're after. ;^) Otherwise, a more girlish bust line would be in order. To make the feathers blend into the picture better, i might composite them with a wash of the color of the water or sky (assumed sky, that is). i would probably make a selection around the feathers, then new layer, then fill the selection with a midtone from the water. Then, mess with opacity & composite method (soft light? hard light?) to acheive a subtle blending. Not too much! i really like your color palette! Sweeeeet. i don't think one would get a lot of reflection in the murky water, and it would be more foreshortened & wavy. You're getting there. It looks nice. Personally, i liked the leaves. You only needed to back off them a little bit. If they had just fallen onto the water that minute, they would still be bright. So, one soggy leaf, a few nice crispy orange ones. Overall, a pretty picture, and i like the mood. The hair came out really well. Is there a little collision with her right breast? Maybe the ends could bend just a tiny, tiny bit there. You know you're almost done when all anyone can think of to say are nitpicks!

Another thing to keep in mind, water breaks perspective by aproximately 60%, so the angle of the legs underwater is not right, they need to be rotated more... Maxx :-)

There's nothing little about those drums. Nice work. The render itself is beautiful.

If even the guys are saying that she is too busty, she is TOO busty. Did you use Dina? (I'm looking at width of shoulder compared to hip, and size of hands.) Nice color work, though. Carolly

It's not that the breasts are TOO busty (I have a hard time saying any breasts are too busty), but the form of them is similar to that which you're see on an older woman. But for her narrow hips, I can't really picture her having such large breasts. I would think it would be very painful on her back. I can't wait to see the picture with suggested modifications because, it's going to look fabulous, even though the current render is very well done.