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Subject: Can I get a critique?

tajshan opened this issue on Dec 13, 2001 ยท 6 posts
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tajshan ( ) posted Thu, 13 December 2001 at 8:52 PM ยท edited Sat, 04 January 2025 at 1:54 PM

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I'm workin on this piece and I need sum constructive critism on my compositing images for a scene. THis scene involves 3 of my characters 'bout to engage in a superpowered brawl. What suggestions do y'all have that I could use to spice it up? Thanx 2 all

tajshan ( ) posted Thu, 13 December 2001 at 8:59 PM

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OH NOOOO. Dat's the wrong image!!! Please forgive the screw-up here it is. Please omit the first 1. Thank U

igohigh ( ) posted Thu, 13 December 2001 at 9:27 PM

It looks like they are in a 'sand pit'? If so I would say the dude jumping needs some 'sand-spay' as dose the one with one foot lifted out of the sand. I'm not sure if this is inside or outside? Because of that stip of yellow at the top edge. Without seeing the previous scene 'before entering the pit' it looks like the scene is not finished......wait...I gues it 'really' isn't finished...dho!

SAMS3D ( ) posted Fri, 14 December 2001 at 3:52 AM

Wow, really exciting. Good work. Sharen

vapor ( ) posted Fri, 14 December 2001 at 7:44 AM

Nice, my suggestion would be, in the bottom image, the figure on the right is having a strong light coming from his hands, that light should make the figure on the left brighter. The sand spray is a good idea too.

tajshan ( ) posted Fri, 14 December 2001 at 3:22 PM

Thanx all!! I get on it right away. Graphic Designers and 3D artists are tight clique. Y'all worldwide. And we don't mind help each other.

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