Attached Link: cover art

Hello all i am making a comic book series(yes i posted a similar message in comic's corner but i don't think alot of people go in there, lol) i have posted the Front cover if the first issue in the poser art gallerys i have inclosed a link for it, please let me know what u think. thanks always bryan

It looks pretty good; the contrasting colors really make it stand out. Or induce eyestrain if you stare too long :) I can't fault the pose or electrical effects, but something about the facial expression bothers me, and I can't quite figure out why.

Wow, that looks real good, I like it. Very cool. Sharen

I checked with my roommate (writer/editor for Eye-n-Apple) and he said it is rather sparse in his eye. Bear in mind, that (especially for a first issue) your cover art is going to be what has to induce someone to pick up and buy the book. Is that a final or still a work in progress? What is the storyline about?

Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/gallery.ez?ByArtist=Yes&Artist=bryan

thanks lol, i hope his faces doesn't disturb u that much,lol

its still work in progress, that why i posted it, i need the info,lol thanks

opps forgot to write in about the plot, at this time i don't want to give to much away, but it involves goverment experments(and i had this idea on paper before dark angle= it is nothing like it i hope) im making it very dark, even the heros do bad things. but it has to do with Egyption gods, and mythology., and takes place after the world trade center attack. i will be posting some of the characters soon, but not yet, not yet. hope this is helpfull bryan