Kelvar was a very cold but beautiful place. Nothing could compare with the sight
of sunlight coming through the cliffs of every cryoprecipitate imaginable and Renata was
especially fond of greenish methane ice.

Inside her exosuit she was warm enough. Renata had a second skin that held and amplified her body temperature. The sensors poked into her flesh and felt like a part of her, if fact she never went anywhere without the silvery exoskin. Even in the barracks the silver suits were worn. To get a tear in ones exoskin would mean death, as the heat loss would be too rapid to heal.

She looked over the plain and glanced at her gravimeter. Everything here was held together with an electric charge. Something was registering as large, metallic and way into the negative voltage.

To find out some of what Renata saw check out the Vue gallery...Does this sound like a contest entry in the works?

You can not have a contest entry that has been posted ANYWHERE before, that includes Rendie forums. If I see a story that has been posted somewhere, I have to discard the entry. Sorry.

Ok, I was just trying to double up on a posting. I was working with Vue and you ladies eyes and the story started to bleed out of my veins. No Nu-be it wasn't bugs if I get you to read on then I'm at 100 percent.