That's soooo cool.  No one ever looks at my gallery..... I'm so happy!

Nah, leave travel pack..... it needs something else though.... it needs to make the reader want to find out what happens. The opening of a short story is like a movie preview... it makes you want to see the movie but not ruin the movie....

I think Xerxes or Darius.... if he had an elephant's head you could name him Hannibal or Ganesha. As far as species is concerned I think he would be called and Rhinotaur in Minoan culture. If her were an Egyptian god Rham-ses. Aztec god Whatthehellisthatzl! Native American: Dances Alone. Hebrew: Rhynim. Slavic: Chernoblyn. British: (doesn't matter they'd just kill it and put it's head on the wall) Austrian: Arnold Rhynonegger. American: Attack of the Rhinomen from Mars. (Ok... I think I''m going too far now ... that was fun though)