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Subject: Libertine ... first poem and graphic combination

Azha opened this issue on May 14, 2003 · 4 posts
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Azha ( ) posted Wed, 14 May 2003 at 2:34 PM · edited Thu, 19 September 2024 at 7:04 AM

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Attached Link: Libertine

the poem I wrote about a year ago on an assignment to depict your muse, the piece I did last night for the 2d forums May theme: sex in art.

"Every line means something."
Jean Michel Basquiat

tjames ( ) posted Thu, 15 May 2003 at 8:29 AM

I enjoyed to poem, but some of the emphasis placed on one word versus another was confusing, as was the centering of the lines. It made reading it a little more difficult.

dialyn ( ) posted Thu, 15 May 2003 at 9:38 AM

I can't comment on the poetry, but the graphic impressed me with your use of technique and color. I keep going back to look at it...really well done.

Azha ( ) posted Thu, 15 May 2003 at 10:32 AM

much thanks to both of you, the centering was an automatic formatting thing and some of the line breaks are accurate as written, some others were not. I see now I have to refresh my html memory, many thanks I will attempt to go back and correct the bad formatting.

"Every line means something."
Jean Michel Basquiat

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