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Subject: January Challenge.... critiques please.


Swade ( ) posted Wed, 14 January 2004 at 8:10 PM · edited Fri, 24 January 2025 at 7:49 AM

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Hi peeps.... haven't done much more than work these past few weeks. However, I wanted to partake of this months challenge as I have never done an under water scene before. Sure would welcome any comments or criticisms. Looking at this the sea turtle looks a bit large yet in proportion to the (DAZ)sea dragon. Wade 8)

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draculaz ( ) posted Wed, 14 January 2004 at 8:24 PM

it's... like 80% perfect! the only thing i'd change would be the blurr of the image (a bit too clear, shadows maybe blurred a bit as well), and the way the light hits.. it doesn't seem like the light falls properly through the waves, or rather, that you don't see it. i mean you see the reflections everywhere, just not the actual light that's causing them. perhaps some volumetrics? great plot to it though, i like it :) drac


RodsArt ( ) posted Wed, 14 January 2004 at 8:38 PM

This looks great, maybe a bit more murkey and or bubbles.

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Quest ( ) posted Wed, 14 January 2004 at 9:04 PM

This is really cool! Perhaps a little haze would help with the underwater effect. Love the barbs on the creature's fins.


GROINGRINDER ( ) posted Wed, 14 January 2004 at 11:10 PM

I always thought the Daz sea serpent looked like shit in Poser, but it looks pretty good here. I think you have the right combination of blur and haze.


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TheBryster ( ) posted Thu, 15 January 2004 at 9:16 AM

WAY TO GO, SWADE!!!!!!!!!! I'm so impressed!....this one just popped outa the screen and slapped me in the chops........(add list of appropriate superlatives here...)

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ysvry ( ) posted Thu, 15 January 2004 at 10:46 AM

looks awwsome. add some kelp (make it slightly transp)in the front to add depth the turtoise is fine imho

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