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Subject: Ahhemm!!! Just fishing too????

kiwi_gg opened this issue on Apr 13, 2004 · 7 posts
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kiwi_gg ( ) posted Tue, 13 April 2004 at 1:17 PM · edited Wed, 06 November 2024 at 12:20 AM

Attached Link: http://http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=642408&Start=1&Artist=kiwi%5Fgg&ByArtist=Yes

After 80 viewings there is not one comment about the latest addition to my gallery. What is wrong with the scene????? What can I do to improve it????? As I have said before, I have a thick hide so you can be honest. Honest critiques are the fuel for improvement.

Cheers
GG

WHO said Kiwi's can't Fly ?????

draculaz ( ) posted Tue, 13 April 2004 at 1:24 PM

hmmm... goes to see it drac

tjohn ( ) posted Tue, 13 April 2004 at 1:27 PM

Your link has a fatal case of double http:/. :^)

This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.

Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.

"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy

draculaz ( ) posted Tue, 13 April 2004 at 1:29 PM

you have attention to detail and the light cones are spot-on. with some minor changes, the image would be excellent :) drac

ddruckenmiller ( ) posted Tue, 13 April 2004 at 1:37 PM

Did you use nested concentric spots?

gammaRascal ( ) posted Tue, 13 April 2004 at 3:14 PM

i thought i posted some good suggestions last time... this time though my eye was caught by the enviromental spill-over into the cockpit. a small detail but an important one. i think its a good pic but im more apt to not post anything in a gallery rather than post a list of things i would change or mistakes i see. (not to suggest anything in this image is a 'mistake') i see alot of potential thats for sure.



Mrdodobird ( ) posted Tue, 13 April 2004 at 4:05 PM

Well, I like it, though as I said in the comment, I would suggest much more contrast (though I've always been a fan of contrast, so I may be biased.

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