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gregsin opened this issue on Apr 04, 2005 · 17 posts
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gregsin ( ) posted Mon, 04 April 2005 at 4:53 PM · edited Thu, 25 July 2024 at 4:44 PM

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Here's an image I've been working on for a few days now. Any suggestions are appreciated. Plants - 3D cafe, the rest Bryce.

Thanks

draculaz ( ) posted Mon, 04 April 2005 at 5:05 PM

very nice details! how did you do the ground with all those rocks?

tjohn ( ) posted Mon, 04 April 2005 at 5:07 PM

This is great. Can't wait to see the final.

This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.

Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.

"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy

ysvry ( ) posted Mon, 04 April 2005 at 5:17 PM

yes that gravel is exelent, the buildings could use a little more contrast though.

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danamo ( ) posted Mon, 04 April 2005 at 5:47 PM

I love the trackwork and ballast(rock)! Very nice industrial buildings.

MoonGoat ( ) posted Mon, 04 April 2005 at 6:05 PM

Great style! I would lower the building textures' ambience though.

Birddie ( ) posted Mon, 04 April 2005 at 6:44 PM

Love the building textures. :)

TheBryster ( ) posted Mon, 04 April 2005 at 8:44 PM

Great piece, but I think the track needs some mechanicals at the crossovers......

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Quest ( ) posted Mon, 04 April 2005 at 11:37 PM

This is developing beautifully. I would maybe cutback on the haze a little to bring up contrast a little and the ski texture seems to need a higher resolution it seems to be a 2D plane. Track switching would do nicely as well. Your ground texture is phenomenal, something you made? Looking forward to the finished piece.

gregsin ( ) posted Tue, 05 April 2005 at 8:45 AM

Thanks for your critique. I had thought about the switching device but wasn't sure about it. The rocks are made up of lots of small terrains. I made the grayscales for them in photoshop using a couple of the pixelate and texture filters. Thanks again.

pakled ( ) posted Tue, 05 April 2005 at 11:20 AM

only thing that might need touchup is to add just a hint of reflectivity on the windows (something cool would be to have the sun glinting off of one, but that would mean postwork..;) the roofs look odd to me, maybe another mat, but everything else is spot on..

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lordstormdragon ( ) posted Tue, 05 April 2005 at 7:03 PM

Nah, you could do the sun-glinting with a well-placed ranged Spotlight. You could also mimic reflections in a off-scene 2d pict object, just angle it properly... I think that more variation in the textures on the building sides would help, but other than that it's modeled wonderfully! The ground looks really great, and the fence and plants are a nice touch.

rstar ( ) posted Tue, 05 April 2005 at 11:05 PM

Great Picture with plenty of detail to look at. My only observation would be that the scale of the fence seems a bit large for the adjacent tracks or the tracks seem to be too narrow in guage(width) for the closeness of the view. Otherwise nice job. Looking forward to the finished work.

tjohn ( ) posted Tue, 05 April 2005 at 11:23 PM

A rusting old locomotive would be a nice addition, too.

This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.

Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.

"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy

TheBryster ( ) posted Wed, 06 April 2005 at 7:27 AM

TJohn: That's no way to talk about Ang...! ;-)

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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster


And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...

tjohn ( ) posted Wed, 06 April 2005 at 12:51 PM

I was going to defend Ang, but decided she could do a better job all by herself. :^) It's been nice knowing you, Bryster. Where would you like the pieces sent? :^D

This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.

Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.

"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy

TheBryster ( ) posted Wed, 06 April 2005 at 2:13 PM

TJohn: Hehehe! I live on Mars......!

Available on Amazon for the Kindle E-Reader

All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster


And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...

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