All in all not a bad first attempt, I remember mine (laugh). I think you need to add some moutains in the background a little farther back to give some depth perception, reduce the haze factor just a little, and add some clouds or something to the sky. Maybe also add some rocks, foliage, stumps, things like that to give a little more activity in the scene.. Good job and keep trying practice makes perfect, if there is such a thing in 3D.

greetz, Well first off from one newbie to another welcome.Ive been playing with bryce/poser for 6months + just not very often.. anyway i digress It looks like your off to a good start. I agree with Deathbringer mountains would be nice in the background and maybe some more trees? Just a thought. SW

Hi nice work for first time. I like the grass texture and the pose of the horse on its hind legs. maybe the mountain is a bit too flat?. I agree that it should be further back as well. Keep up the good work and remember if you can't get it first time don't give up!.