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Subject: Photograph


ibassplayer205 ( ) posted Wed, 27 April 2005 at 2:45 AM · edited Sat, 16 November 2024 at 11:39 AM

DANG! Im turnin out these sappy love poems pretty quickly, huh? Heres another quick one I came out with in a few minutes. Personally I dont think its as good as 'Torn', but thats just me. Enjoy!


Every night,
Before I sleep,
I dream.

I gaze into your eyes,
A feeling so great.

Is it love?

Every night,
I hold you,
I hold you in my arms,
And in my heart.

I brush your hair,
I caress your face,
And I hold your hand.

But this photograph isn't enough.
I want the real thing.
I need the real thing.
I need you.


labinski ( ) posted Wed, 27 April 2005 at 7:38 AM

I remember reading a book once on love and limmerance...I believe that's how it's spelled. It defines limmerance as that state where the abscence of a loved one creates a physical compulsion to be with that person. One can't eat, can't sleep, the idle thoughts are focused on that person. We have taken this human condition for granted. I hope the object of your desire is benevolent and compassionate in accepting or rejecting those feelings.


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