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Subject: Autumn Haiku Mini-Challenge


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TheAlex ( ) posted Thu, 01 December 2005 at 5:24 PM

Congrats on the AoM jstro. 8D Strangely enough it snowed the day after I wrote that Haiku. I bet it looks amazing in the Rockies. Anyway... --- Fall, the fruits I see on cold earth, planting new seeds for another time.


hauksdottir ( ) posted Thu, 01 December 2005 at 10:54 PM

Time freezes the sap In marrowed limbs, in heartwood, Slow beats full measure. Carolly And, yes, congratulations, Jon!


netsia ( ) posted Fri, 02 December 2005 at 11:33 AM

measure not the snow, by inches,foot,yard or mile enjoy the journey :) snowblowers....a good thing


TheAlex ( ) posted Fri, 02 December 2005 at 6:27 PM

Journey of seasons, white, green, a splash of colour. I see long shadows.


hauksdottir ( ) posted Sat, 03 December 2005 at 9:22 AM

shadows touch and flee frost-edged rock and bladed grass: geese gabble above


jstro ( ) posted Wed, 07 December 2005 at 6:37 PM

Above, crystals form. North Wind mixes and stirs them. Autumn's first snow falls.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


hauksdottir ( ) posted Thu, 08 December 2005 at 12:13 AM

Falls of russet leaves sharp scraps like scissored paper Dry rain rustling (and, yes, I do pronoun the middle syllable in rustling)


TheAlex ( ) posted Sat, 10 December 2005 at 7:35 PM

Rustling has stopped now that autumn's gone away. Trees lay rest for now.


jstro ( ) posted Sat, 10 December 2005 at 9:05 PM

Now don't be hasty, For autumn's not over yet. Ignore all that snow.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


TheAlex ( ) posted Sat, 10 December 2005 at 10:00 PM

(like it, jstro) Snow, what? Speak with haste, not so much to see here. It's blue sky or rain.


netsia ( ) posted Sun, 11 December 2005 at 5:38 PM

rain on the parade? I think not, snow? rain? or mixed please just watch the road **** my public service announcement, after a tangle with black ice last week, black and blue are NOT festival colors and bruised ribs are NO fun....be safe


hauksdottir ( ) posted Sun, 11 December 2005 at 10:17 PM

Road of thin branches Whips the incautious squirrel: Nuts go scattering. ********************* And you take care, too! Black ice is dangerous even to walk over (I still have scars on my face from an encounter 20 years ago). Try not to get sick... you don't want to cough until those ribs heal. Carolly


TheAlex ( ) posted Mon, 12 December 2005 at 6:55 AM

Scattering leaves pass the window as I look out. A storm is raging.


netsia ( ) posted Mon, 12 December 2005 at 12:20 PM

raging and roaring clouds like albino lions snow the end result


jstro ( ) posted Mon, 12 December 2005 at 3:39 PM

Result of cycles Ever forming, without end. Fall fades to winter. --- Yes, be careful and be well. Best wishes for a speedy recovery. jon

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


netsia ( ) posted Mon, 12 December 2005 at 5:16 PM

winter of content feathered skies, downy landscape mountains' crystal crest **** thanks y'all for the good wishes I can't impress enough how quickly and out of the blue an accident can happen on icy roads....be cautious! I am still shaking my head, a week later, can't believe I'm still here. 'There is a reason for everything'


TheAlex ( ) posted Mon, 12 December 2005 at 7:02 PM

Crest of the sparrow, proud as it pecks for fell seeds. Will it pass winter? **** I'm aware of how the roads can be after extreme weather changes too, it was the best car I ever had, but luckily it was only the car and few bricks that were written off.


hauksdottir ( ) posted Tue, 13 December 2005 at 8:35 AM

Winter steals the hue From sky, from leaf, from deep pool... Where is hidden hoard?


netsia ( ) posted Thu, 15 December 2005 at 9:58 AM

hoard the winter sun secret it to your abode bathe in it's lustre


TheAlex ( ) posted Thu, 15 December 2005 at 3:38 PM

Lustre in puddles. Last of autumn leaves reflect, sorry skies to me. --- "Me" can't be the easiest word to start a Haiku on. :S


jstro ( ) posted Thu, 15 December 2005 at 5:06 PM

Me, alone in woods. Naked trees bend in the wind. Autumn's glory, gone. --- I don't know. I'd rather tackle me than luster. That one had me stumped. Good job. jon

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


netsia ( ) posted Thu, 15 December 2005 at 9:38 PM · edited Thu, 15 December 2005 at 9:40 PM

gone, in a moment
soon to be replaced by kin,
fate of the snowflake

Message edited on: 12/15/2005 21:40


hauksdottir ( ) posted Thu, 15 December 2005 at 11:53 PM

Snowflake and snowfall, chiseled scrap from solid cloud, Wind's serrated edge.


TheAlex ( ) posted Fri, 16 December 2005 at 4:37 PM

Edge of the forest, I enter wicked winter. It's cold in here.


XoxoTree ( ) posted Sat, 17 December 2005 at 3:05 AM

Enter into rime crystal zephyr wind blows strong falling flakes down

"One Oneness One"


jstro ( ) posted Sat, 17 December 2005 at 8:31 AM · edited Sat, 17 December 2005 at 8:31 AM

Down jackets, cinched tight.
Raw red ears, and mittened hands.
They call this Autumn?

Message edited on: 12/17/2005 08:31

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


netsia ( ) posted Sat, 17 December 2005 at 8:13 PM

autumn? look around snow on the mountains, ice breaths crystallize mid-air


XoxoTree ( ) posted Sat, 17 December 2005 at 8:47 PM

Midwest sunlight blast Across the autumn leaves strike Perspective view autumn

"One Oneness One"


TheAlex ( ) posted Mon, 26 December 2005 at 5:16 PM

Autumn stirs its last, just echoes of the past life. It will replenish.


hauksdottir ( ) posted Tue, 27 December 2005 at 1:34 AM

Replenish! Refill! Restore! Cloaked in early dark is land's recovery. Do we want to shift to winter mode... since it is after soltice... or keep this string going until the crocus pop up? :) Carolly


dialyn ( ) posted Tue, 27 December 2005 at 5:36 AM
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