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Subject: I Would Sure Appreciate Your Critiques Please

Swade opened this issue on Dec 29, 2005 · 12 posts
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Swade ( ) posted Thu, 29 December 2005 at 1:24 AM · edited Sun, 26 January 2025 at 2:07 PM

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Just an image I am working on that seems to be missing something. Thought I would ask you guys and gals for your thoughts, ideas, crits, or comments.

Thanks in advance.

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Claymor ( ) posted Thu, 29 December 2005 at 2:35 AM

First thing it seems to be missing is/are shadows. The wizard guy looks flat and both characters look like they are floating above the ground because there are no shadows cast beneath them. The demon could be airborne but I would think the wizard is standing yeah?

pauljs75 ( ) posted Thu, 29 December 2005 at 3:31 AM

Where's the little numbers showing hitpoints and whether or not the wizard leveled up?

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Dann-O ( ) posted Thu, 29 December 2005 at 3:52 AM

The violet on teh groudn is a bit too much for me. Need to subdue soem of your colors adn make the demon stand out as being red instead of washing him in a sea of purple.

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draculaz ( ) posted Thu, 29 December 2005 at 6:54 AM

very game-y, i would perhaps play with the lighting bolts a bit, postwork them in with xenofex 2's 30 day trial lightning plugin for ps. and give the lighting a bit more drama. all the same, solid composition and very nice models :) drac

pakled ( ) posted Thu, 29 December 2005 at 8:23 AM

you might want to take some of the 'substance' out of the demon's weapon..make it look a bit more like energy..that's my 2p..;)

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ellocolobo ( ) posted Thu, 29 December 2005 at 11:18 AM

Fun picture...I would give the wizard the usual long hair..

RodsArt ( ) posted Thu, 29 December 2005 at 4:31 PM

Nice start....OK here goes ..Shadows ..Red background is too close in color to the demon, he gets lost. ...the purple ground IS distracting ...lightning bolts are a little stiff(Dracs idea!) ...Hair or none at all (maybe wizards crown). Like I said...nice start. I'm not brave enough to start one of these mostly because of the amount of post I would have to do to it to be satisfied. Keep us updated!! Rod

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bikermouse ( ) posted Fri, 30 December 2005 at 12:32 AM

boulders/rocks perhaps plants, clouds/haze? I like the concept and the purple ground isn't at all displeasing; perhaps a bit too bright given the brightness of the sky. I think that he point of view seems to be from the perspective of someone just a bit shorter than the daemon and I'd tend to root for the daemon based on that. the daemon seems to be facing the camera rather than his adversary. Can't wait to see what you do with it!

Swade ( ) posted Fri, 30 December 2005 at 8:57 PM

Thanks all... I sure do appreciate you takin the time to look. You have given me some good ideas to think about and work on. Will have a new WIP posted soon.

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danamo ( ) posted Fri, 30 December 2005 at 11:12 PM

I took a look too Wade, but I didn't know what to suggest because I'm not experienced in making that style of scene. I like the structure and composition,lol.

Swade ( ) posted Fri, 30 December 2005 at 11:16 PM

Lol.... Thanks Dan. 8)

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