Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=1150982&Start=1&Sectionid=6&filter_genre_id=0&WhatsN

I did an image using Transposer to bring a P6 scene into the Carrara 5Pro Demo(CS5) to test Ambient Occlusion (AO) in CS5. This was just a test, nothing serious, but there was something about it that I really liked (still do) so I posted it in my Gallery. I now have the full version of CS5 Pro, and Id like to take the image to the next level. Im hoping that a few of you will take a look at the image and give me some feedback on it - warning NUDITY NVIT-but no sword :-). The next version will probably include more clothing (unless there is a strong consensus to leave it the way it is). The 2 things that I have on my list to improve on are: 1) better lighting on NewsBabe Rene and 2) better shaders on the lamp in the background. I may also add a crystal to the alter, to add a little more to the image (and play with caustics).

Thanks in advance!

DR

WOOOW........is this constructive enough ??????

:) :)

IMHO the sky clashes with the girl and set. The sky looks bright and blue. The set looks more like it's on an overcast day - or maybe late afternoon with warm golden or reddish light. I think it would be better if you replaced the sky with a roof that could be lit consistantly with the rest of the chamber.

I followed this link to give ya a critique, only to find that I had already been to the image and commented. Your thumb stood out enough in my browsing of the All>Fantasy section to make me want to veiw your image, and the full image was a great reward for clicking on the thumbnail. With all the thumbs hitting the gallery daily, I hope this gives you an idea of what a great piece of art you created and how well you promoted it :)

Thanks to all for your suggestions and observations. I've started working on the next version, and hope to have it out in a couple of weeks. This one will have my own building in it (I'm working on it now). Some of the lighting issues in the original image were due to a transparent wall in the doorway. The new image will also incoroporate everyones comments.

Thanks Again!
DR