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Subject: New-ish Here


scoleman123 ( ) posted Mon, 22 January 2007 at 9:39 AM · edited Fri, 10 January 2025 at 2:10 AM

Well, not too new to photography, I have been at it for 2+ years.

Anyway, comments and critique on this image?

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by the way, have not seen you, pushinfaders since the den closed. how are things going?

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TwoPynts ( ) posted Mon, 22 January 2007 at 9:46 AM · edited Mon, 22 January 2007 at 9:47 AM

Hello and welcome. I see from your gallery that you've been posting photos for a while so are not that new at it. Your image is great -- you have some really nice textures and the selective color is particularly effective there. My main critique would be that the crayons are dead center. Moveing them to the sides a bit more would have made the image more dynamic. I might have moved the camera view up a little and to the left to push the crayons more down and right and eliminate a little of the distracting foreground.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Onslow ( ) posted Mon, 22 January 2007 at 11:41 AM

Welcome to the photography section :)

And every one said, 'If we only live,
We too will go to sea in a Sieve,---
To the hills of the Chankly Bore!'
Far and few, far and few, Are the lands where the Jumblies live;
Their heads are green, and their hands are blue, And they went to sea in a Sieve.

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vlaaitje ( ) posted Mon, 22 January 2007 at 4:28 PM

I agree with TwoPynts, 

member since Oct 27, 2004
75 images, last upload Jan 22, 2007

I will browse your work now

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scoleman123 ( ) posted Tue, 23 January 2007 at 11:19 AM

Thanks TwoPynts. I did crop the image, and I must say, it looks so much better. 

Tahnks for the advice.

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