At work I've foolishly set up a challenge with a colleague to do a picture. The theme was decided by another colleague as 'Mystery', with any format allowed. This is my entry, but she lives with 3 graphic artists. Please, BE CRITICAL, I need to know what to improve!! There's a little bit at stake this time..... THANK YOU!!!

You need to give the picture a focal point.

Okay, here is my idea....I don't even know if it will work. but I would put the murder weapons in the middle or the middle bottom and then I would try to get a photo of what looked like coronel mustard and maybe two women and put them at the top corners and center. Make the weapons a larger image than the people. So your focus would go more towards the weapons. Like I said, I am not sure how this would work, but it might... Leigh I think its a great idea of what you have started with....I loved the game clue!!

Hmmm... thanks, peeps, that sure has given me food for thought. I've gorra be honest, I like both ideas! As usual your inspiration has given me another one also....I'll have a play about and see what happens! Thanx again! Mike.