I have completed a video poem about the vigilante called "Vigilante Overlook."  I would love some feedback on it.  I am still learning, so I know it could be better, but I am pretty happy with it.  I'm actually kind of tired of working on it and want to move on, but I would still like some feedback on how it can be better, or what I am doing well.

Please have a look:  Vigilante Overlook

Thanks!

interesting video.
Since you are working on a city, you may well add something special to it. For example, maybe a futuristic city like the one in the fifth element, with flying cars and all that. You can also add some atmospherics, such as fog and smoke.

Hey, sorry for never responding to your response.

I do want to thank you for taking the time to give me some suggestions.  :-)

I've been told by other people that downloading the file is somewhat of a problem, so I'll post again when I get a YouTube version available that is a more managable download.  Also, I plan to improve it some more.

You said that I was working on a city, but this is not really accurate.  I can't take credit for any of the models.  These are all free content that I got through DAZ 3D.  I only worked on the animation and video editing.
I see how your suggestions would make for a more impressive cityscape, but I'm not sure I am up to the challenge right now.  I may just file that away for next time.

Thanks again.

"but I'm not sure I am up to the challenge right now.  I may just file that away for next time."

those are the kind of words nobody should ever say. Challenging yourself will only serve to improve your skills ;)

Well, that is true, but I am already challenging myself by learning several 3D packages at once, plus various other projects I am working on.  This all adds up to slow progress, but it is the way I enjoy working. :)