Stop ... - Version 2 by odf

Poser • Realism • posted on Jul 19, 2005

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Description

Based on the comments to the original version and some discussion in the Poser forum, I've made some changes to the eye and teeth shaders. I've also experimented with the position of the main light and applied face_off's fake sss to one of the back lights, which together changed the atmosphere considerably. The dark background did no longer fit and I picked a lighter one. I hope these changes together justify posting this new version. Thanks to everyone who made comments and suggestions on my previous attempts, especially to face_off, who was, as usual, always spot on.

Production Credits

Bryn for Jessi

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Comments (18)

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werun

1:29PM | Tue, 19 July 2005

Wow, a superrealistic portrait. Great job!!!

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seattletim

1:30PM | Tue, 19 July 2005

WOW! What a grat delight it is to see how you have worked on this image! The changes are stunning - very photo-realistic. Thanks for sharing both images. What an excellent artist you are!

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dricci

2:09PM | Tue, 19 July 2005

Very realistic *****

rhodeder

2:29PM | Tue, 19 July 2005

Wow! great job dude! i rate this a 3 out of 5 haha just joking a definite 5 out of 5 and you deserved it! good job man! -Derek

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jhustead

2:43PM | Tue, 19 July 2005

What the heck is "fake sss"? Please somebody answer me!!! This render looks great!

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linkdink

2:44PM | Tue, 19 July 2005

What an incredibly vibrant photogr- I mean render! This is really cool!

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Sivana

3:23PM | Tue, 19 July 2005

Great close-up render!

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jeffg3

3:34PM | Tue, 19 July 2005

should the teeth have some sss also?

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bandred

4:19PM | Tue, 19 July 2005

Hi Olaf, some nice improvements in this one. The teeth in particular look considerably better. I like the way the eyewhites are toned down too. Raising the main light has made a number of subtle but pleasing changes. I think the image looks a lot better for having fewer highlights on the right hand side her face. Also, the shadows at the corners of the mouth and the position of the nose shadow are both better as a result. You're right about the background too, this one is much more suitable for this image. I certainly feel you are justified in posting this image... I've learned a lot from it and can't wait to see how you are going to make further improvements ;) Excellent work !

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face_off

5:37PM | Tue, 19 July 2005

Interesting to compare this version against the original. Changing the lighting made a huge difference - with this version having more above-light and looking much more natural. Also interesting that there are some glitches where her hair is going through her left shoulder - and maybe that is a shadowing problem. Anyway - outstanding render. Top stuff.

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Ultra

6:15PM | Tue, 19 July 2005

Very Kissable - Excellent and real

philo_beddoe

11:40PM | Tue, 19 July 2005

Oh Yeah... This is the ticket. I liked version 1 a lot, but I like this one even better. The teeth and the gum line look so much better and the pose has a real sense of "action" to it. Nice Job.

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Nod

11:18AM | Wed, 20 July 2005

Gorgeous. As to the hair at the shoulder, that could be touched up instead of doing anything drastic.

UweMattern

12:09AM | Thu, 21 July 2005

This is a lot better than the previous version, The skin and especial the teeth and inner mouth is spot on. The hair is poking in her left shoulder and on the top right side of her head it is to thin i think... Anyway top work! ~Uwe

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