All I can say is... it hit me hard and reminded me that I am still a 'twilight kid'

@ eternalwytch1...As am I....

What can I say Gin? I have said it before, and I say it again..you are so talented, and you just HAVE to get your writing itno a book. I saw John's picture, and I read your poem, it is so strong and gives me feelings inside that I can't even try to explain. It touches me in a way that I have some problems writing here. I guess this must be one of the most powerful and at the same time wonderful poems that I've ever read. In the way John express his feelings through his wonderful pictures, you do it through your strong words. You put them togheter in a way that gives the reader a deep feeling under their skin, ecpecially me. I can truly understand that John(qmont) asked you to write something for him, you are a natural talent Gin! I guess this poem will be placed in my mind and heart for a very long time. Thank you so much for sharing this excellent poem! vote

A most wonderful written work!! - Vote - Reflects many people in the world, I'm sure. Reminds me of the old saying, "You can lead a horse to water, but you cannot make it drink". Here's hoping that someone will share their water with you. And, here's hoping that you will quench your thirst when offered. Reminds me of another old saying, "Nothing ventured, nothing gained". Methinks your twilight child will enjoy the bright light of day soon. Peace & Love to you and yours. My best, T.P.

WOW!!!!!!! That was AMAZING and touching... Excellent work...look forward to reading more!!!!

Ginny, you know what I think of this, I am truly honored that you agreed to take part in this work with me my friend....you are such a fantastic writer, and your way with words is just extrodanry.......Thank you with all my heart........your pal..............HUGS....John

Whew. I had talked to John about this work and have known about it's coming for some time. It says on my homepage here that I don't claim to be an artist and I don't. These two works are why I can't. I could never put into words the emotion you do and have done with this piece. You say that John's painting would stand alone, and yes it would. But this script would and does stand just as strong by it's self. Together they move and may just change things that can be changed. Vote and Congrads on a job well done !!!!!

This is beautiful, especially the hopeful (?) ending. How does one rescue such a child? How does one give trust without getting wounded in return? ... What if, one offers one's trust, and shows that they care, and has faith in such a child ... and the child doesn't get it? --Sorry if this is incoherent: I'm kinda deep in my own grief today, but mine will pass; these children may always be there, unless society as a whole learns how to help, and takes concerted, concerned, action to do so... with emphasis on the "concerned." If we don't give a ____, they'll know. Kids are smarter than adults; they haven't learned to be stupid yet.

It is nice to see that people are giving your writing the credit it deserves. Please dont think you are worthy, because simply you are Just enjoy your talent. As always I will comment by saying simply excellent my dear, but then Ginny I believe all my comments end that way so in order to break the norm of my little messages Ill say something different. You catch these words and sculpt them to form a tower of lyrical beauty. From which you stand, and you should stand proud of the mastery you hold over these simple letters. An outstanding piece of writing and a pleasure to read, I only wish there was less of a time between your posts. But then it does each one you make even more special. Take care Ben ;0)

What an excellent, but very sad bit of writing - straight from the heart's painful experiences of life! I also admire gmont's art and saw the picture too. The two need marrying up together on one page somehow... Or in a book.. I totally agree with everything Shadowmonkey has said too!

Ginny, How powerful this is! You lady, are so courageous! I also, as you know, am a child of the twilight. Your beautiful words evoke such strong feelings, striking my spirit! Your writing has a healing quality to it, Ginny. I know how I came to be this way, and I know I want to be different, to have faith in people, to be able to show who I truly am, without the masks. Being here has helped me so much, your writings have helped me immensely! I have made some wonderful friends here, have become a more open, less sad person. Thank you! Leanndra

Gosh, you had tears in my eyes with this poem. Very powerful work, full of emotions and the harsh realitites that some children grow up living. The image that goes with this puts a face to the children who are hurt by bad family conditions, it enhances and makes the words even more powerful. You and him should do a colaberation on a book. You could submit somewhere or you could have it published with lulu.com I'm sure other's would love a book of illustrated poetry. Thanks for sharing your words. Hugs Maria

Just to let you know I was here..have spent the day crying, for you, for me, for all who need to be freed..I will be back...your words are all our words you know...