Black Satin by Drandon
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The place where I met her is the same place we began to say goodbye. It
Comments (4)
mind2mind
The strongest emotion here is sorrow for the loss, but there is also the lingering aftertaste of lonely ritualized acceptance. I think you needed to add a few bits and pieces of her own personality to disclose her spirit to the audience. By this I mean her beliefs, pet peeves, favorite things, a phrase that she uses. There must be something of her that we, too, can miss. The scene was vivid.
SusiQ
I am sitting here with my eyes filled with tears. This is an incredibly emotive piece. What a way to say goodbye, remember and to grieve. Thank you.
Faery_Light
Such an emotional piece! At first I thought it was just going to be so-so. But this is wonderful. You might wannt to correct the one word "wrested" as it appears to be a typo, I'm sure you meant "rested". (I hate it when I do that.) Give us a bit more of her personality and lengthen this a tad. And then, Wow!
FireTemptress
I'm moved beyond words..... How healing writing this must be, and how incredibly humbling that you shared it with us. Thank you...