~Promises~ by Kalliandra

Writers • Gothic • posted on Sep 01, 2005

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Terror washes over you as you realize you

Comments (7)

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pangor

1:06AM | Thu, 01 September 2005

I am so glad that you don't feel that way anymore. The writing itself is powerful and full of emotion, there reader, (or at least me) is drawn into the situation and the anguish that the writing speaks of.. I hope that writing this was a purging of that nightmare and that tonight you will have nothing but sweet dreams. -- Pangor

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FireTemptress

1:10AM | Thu, 01 September 2005

Wow..... this was gripping. What a way with words. Excellent!

mind2mind

1:21AM | Thu, 01 September 2005

Unique and relevant... to this intensely dark... and frightful nightmare... is the creative... stacatto fragments of panic... that skitter and stop... skitter and stop... like gasping shallow gulps... of precious air... and stuttering heart beats... and it is this fear... that stays in the foreground... steadily... all the way through!

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Kalliandra

12:08PM | Thu, 01 September 2005

Thank you :D I'm glad that you thought good of it... :D I hope to hear more from other people and their opinions... hugs to all

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